your.sugar
02.10.07, 20:46
Nie jestem zbyt dobra w pisaniu po angielsku. Proszę, zerknijcie na to swoim
fachowym okiem:
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. We thought, that must
be our teacher, but we saw only school corridor and nothing else. Nobody
stayed behind the door! Suddenly lights turned off. It was december, so we
fared in bad situation - round us was absolutly dark.
Some girl shouted. I wanted scream too, but I was felt that it wasn`t good
idea. I heard the noise from corridor, but I couldn`t see anything.
One boy - Borys - went out od class and the noise stopped. I feel like in
horror film - I was frightend and I didn`t know, what I must do. Borys said,
that school is closed and we left alone in building. I thought 'How he don`t
afraid?! He must be very brave.'
Always I was very ambitious and I didn`t want be worse than Borys, so I
decided to go with him.
'Ok, we go down to the basement' - said Borys.
'Oh no! I don`t go into the darkness! Never! I can check this floor' - I replied.
'As you wish. I try to find something on basement, maybe there will be fuses'.
We split up and eahc of us went in other side. Borys went downstairs, I came
back to the corridor, but I can`t find my class... I was really scared, tears
ran across my cheeks. After few steps I tripped about something.
The lights turned on and I saw body my teacher - sche was lying on the floor
and... she was death.
I don`t remember anything else. After while I was sitting on the square near
my school. It was still closed and dark...
Prosze o szybką odpowiedź i z góry dziękuję ;)