Could you?;))) check of korz..............

IP: *.artcom.pl / *.jawnet.pl 02.02.04, 17:46
It' s rather long... So, if you don't want to read all text, could you tell
me:
To begin with, it is a very exciting job becouse an archaeologist discoveres
old civilizations, which often are forgotten or completly unknown.
Is it correctly?
AND:
In adition it is a boring job becouse before discover you must spend a long
time looking for litlle evidences in the ground.
Is it correctly?
But if you have too much time I'll be really greatful when you read all the
text (ugh, zdanie warunkowe)


Some people see it as a boring job while other think it is an axciting and
interesting careerWhatever your views, there is no doubt that working as an
archaeologist is a job with many advantages and disadvantages.
There are several arguments in favour of working as an archaeologist. To
begin with, it is a very exciting job becouse an archaeologist discoveres
old civilizations, which often are forgotten or completly unknown. For
example few weeks ago we could heard about Polish discovery in Egypt. Our
scienists found an old cementary (next to the Dżakkar's pyramid).
Furthermore it is an interesting job becouse an archaeologist travels around
all world. He can works in Asia, Africa, South America...
Working as an archaeologist is also a chance to become famous as Howard
Carter or Henry Schlimann.
However there are also a number of disadvantages to being an
archaeologist. Firstly, it is a tiring job - archaeologist works outdoor, in
hard conditions.
In adition it is a boring job becouse before discover you must spend a long
time looking for litlle evidences in the ground.
To conclude, I belive that, although being an archaeologist can be
difficult at times, it is worth it. It is exciting to learn about old
civilizations and look for signs of their lives...
:))
    • etbl Re: Could you?;))) check of korz.............. 02.02.04, 19:36
      Here come my suggestions:


      > Some people see it as a boring job while other think it is an axciting and


      as a tedious occupation (instead of "as a boring job")
      others
      exciting


      > interesting career. Whatever your views, there is no doubt that working as
      an
      > archaeologist is a job with many advantages and disadvantages.
      > There are several arguments in favour of working as an archaeologist. To
      > begin with, it is a very exciting job becouse an archaeologist discoveres


      discovers


      > old civilizations, which often are forgotten or completly unknown. For
      > example few weeks ago we could heard about Polish discovery in Egypt. Our


      a few weeks ago
      we heard
      a Polish discovery


      > scienists found an old cementary (next to the Dżakkar's pyramid).


      cemetery
      Dzakkar - it is a Polish spelling


      > Furthermore it is an interesting job becouse an archaeologist travels around


      because


      > all world. He can works in Asia, Africa, South America...


      travels around the whole world
      he can work in...


      > Working as an archaeologist is also a chance to become famous as Howard


      gives you a chance to


      > Carter or Henry Schlimann.
      > However there are also a number of disadvantages to being an


      However,


      > archaeologist. Firstly, it is a tiring job - archaeologist works outdoor, in


      how about "demanding" instead of "tiring"?
      an archeologist
      outdoors


      > hard conditions.
      > In adition it is a boring job becouse before discover you must spend a long


      in addition - or better: "secondly" (you did use "firstly", so be consequent
      and use "secondly" to follow it up)
      it is a tedious occupation (instead of "it is a boring job")
      because
      before you discover anything at all...


      > time looking for litlle evidences in the ground.


      looking for small pieces of evidence


      > To conclude, I belive that, although being an archaeologist can be
      > difficult at times, it is worth it. It is exciting to learn about old
      > civilizations and look for signs of their lives...


      to look
      for signs of life


      > :))

      I wish you luck with your homework.
      • Gość: millianillililli Re: Could you?;))) check of korz.............. IP: *.artcom.pl / *.jawnet.pl 02.02.04, 19:55
        Fęk ju wery wery macz :)))))))
        I will give you a big lollipop;) Would you?
    • Gość: m Re: Could you?;))) check of korz.............. IP: *.artcom.pl / *.jawnet.pl 02.02.04, 19:38
    • Gość: justa Re: Could you?;))) check of korz.............. IP: *.gdansk.sdi.tpnet.pl 03.02.04, 11:09
      Some people see it as a boring job, while others think it is an exciting and
      interesting career. Whatever your views are, there is no doubt that working as
      an
      archaeologist is a job with many advantages and disadvantages.
      There are several arguments in favour of working as an archaeologist. To
      begin with, it is a very exciting job because an archaeologist discovers
      old civilizations, which are often forgotten or completely unknown. For
      example, a few weeks ago we could hear about a Polish discovery in Egypt. Our
      scientists found an old cementary (next to the Dżakkar's pyramid).
      Furthermore, it is an interesting job, because an archaeologist travels around
      the world. He can work in Asia, Africa, South America...
      Working as an archaeologist is also an opportunity to become as famous as
      Howard
      Carter or Henry Schlimann.
      However, there is also a number of disadvantages to being an
      archaeologist. Firstly, it is a tiring job - archaeologist works outdoor, in
      hard conditions.
      In adition, it is a boring job, because before each discovery you must spend a
      long
      time looking for little evidences in the ground.
      To conclude, I believe that, although being an archaeologist can be
      difficult at times, it is worth it. It is exciting to learn about old
      civilizations and look for signs of their lives...
      • Gość: justa Re: Could you?;))) check of korz.............. IP: *.gdansk.sdi.tpnet.pl 03.02.04, 16:26
        no tak, nie zauważyłam błędów, które poprawiła poprzedniczka, musisz zsumować
        nasze sugestie ;)
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