Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........

10.09.05, 14:33
Mam prośbę do osób ,które ten język rozumieją:-)Bo niestety, chociaż się
bardo staram i uczę sie go... dalej mam problemy w pisaniu.
Czy moglibyście sprawdzić i skorygować poniższy tekst??
Bardzo proszę. A jeśli już ktos znajdzie chwilkę czasu, to czy móglby
napisacie jakie to błędy popełniam??
Oto i on:

Ideal companion is my friend, Paulina.Ahe know, what I feel and she
understand me. In journey, I would wear my favourite T-shirt and my
threadbare jeans.I good feel, when I wear T-shirt and jeans.
I'd probably buy some souvenirs my mum, and my friends in traditional
japanese shop. I'd probably buy japanese jewellery and Kimono for me.
I would like to eat suchi, and I would like to drink Sake. Sake is
traditional japanese vine. I would like to see Temple Ise, Temple Izumo and
Palace Kioto. In Japan, I would like to meet Emperor's Jimmu, but It is
impossible becouse, he was died. I would like to send a postcard my famile
and friends. My perfeckt weekend would spoil rain. Japan is very interesing
place.Japananese coultur is wonderfull. They have fascinating history.

No to tyle
    • wiedenka12031999 Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 10.09.05, 22:29
      Jest troche błędów...poniżej poprawiony tekst:

      My ideal companion is my friend, Paulina. She knows how I feel and she
      understands me. For jurney I would wear my favourite t-shirt and my threadbare
      jeans. I feel good wearing t-shirs and jeans. I would probably buy some
      souvenirs for my mum and my friends in traditional japanese shop. I'd probably
      buy japanese jewellry and Kimono for myslef. I would like to eay sushi and
      drink Sake. Sake is a traditional japanese wine. I would like to see Temple
      Ise, Temple Izumo and Palace Kioto. In Japan, I would like to meet The Emperor
      Jimmu, but it is impossible because he is dead. I would also like to send some
      poscards to my family and friends. My perfect weekend would spoil rain. Japan
      is a very interesting place and its culture is wonderfull. It has a fascinating
      history!
      • axxolotl Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 11.09.05, 00:48
        I dalej z bledami jest.
        • kasiika Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 11.09.05, 04:51

          For jurney I would wear my favourite t-shirt and my threadbare
          jeans.
          - for travelling ....

          I feel good wearing t-shirs and jeans.
          - I like wearing
          jak juz pieszesz "I feel good" to raczej I feel "well"
          ale to nie jest typowe angielskie wyrazenie do okreslenia noszenia czegos

          I would probably buy some
          souvenirs for my mum and my friends in A traditional japanese shop.
          - in A traditional japanese shop.



          I'd probably
          buy japanese jewellry and Kimono for myslef.
          - SOME japanese jewellery, myself (spelling)


          I would like to eay sushi and

          - EAT sushi
          I would like to see Temple

          Ise, Temple Izumo and Palace Kioto.
          - THE Temple Izumo and THE Palace Kioto


          My perfect weekend would spoil rain.
          - niewiadomo o co tu chodzi, czy boisz sie ze deszcze moze padac?
          wtedy moze: "I hope my perfect weekend won't be spoilt by rain.



          Japan
          is a very interesting place and its culture is wonderfull.
          - wonderful

          • axxolotl Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 11.09.05, 07:01
            Juz lepiej, ale jeszcze nie za dobrze. Kto nastepny?

            I'm beginning to have so much fun here just criticizing ;)
            • robertoniro Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 11.09.05, 13:36
              kasiika - 6+
              Axol - widocznie slabiutko z Twoim angielskim - podejrzwam ze nawet bardzo.
              nie zabieraj miejsca na tym forum.
    • praenomen Re: Bardzo proszę o przejrzenie........ 11.09.05, 13:51
      My ideal companion is my friend, Paulina. She perfectly knows how I feel and she
      understands me as well. Both of us like travelling. While I’m roaming through
      different countries I like wearing my favourite T-shirt and my threadbare jeans.
      I feel well wearing T-shirts and jeans.

      What would I do if I had been to Japan? Hmm, first of all, I would probably buy
      couple of souvenirs for my mum and my friends in a traditional Japanese shop. As
      far as I’m concerned, I'd probably splash out for Japanese jewellery and a
      Kimono. Furthermore, I would like to taste some “Sushi” and drink some “Sake”
      because it is a traditional Japanese food and indispensable ingredient of every
      Japanese meal.

      What is more, I would like to see the Temples of Ise and Izumo and obviously the
      Palace Kioto. Unfortunately, The Emperor Jimmu is dead; however, if he had been
      alive, I would have certainly wanted to meet him. Not mention the fact that, I
      would also like to send some
      postcards to my family and friends. My perfect weekend would be spoiled by rain
      only.

      To sum up, Japan, its history and culture is wonderful and very interesting
      itself. Japan is the most fascinating place I would like to visit.

      I suppose there are more mistakes but honestly I do not have more time, have a
      nice corecting session :)
    • ms.jones battle-ax happy? ;) 11.09.05, 15:06
      My ideal companion would be my friend Pauline. She knowS how I feel and she
      > understandS me. When travelling I would wear my favourite T-shirt and my
      > threadbare jeans. I'm most comfortable in jeans and A t-shirt.
      > I'd probably buy some souvenirs FOR my mum and my friends from A traditional
      > japanese shop. I'd probably buy SOME japanese jewellery and A kimono for
      myself.
      > I would like to try/taste/eat lots of sushi and I would like to drink some
      sake. Sake is A traditional japanese rice WINE. I would like to see the Ise
      Temple, the Izumo Temple and the KYoto Palace.
      In Japan, I would like to meet Emperor Jimmu, but it is
      > impossible becAuse he is dead. (pomijajac to, ze jest to postac mityczna :)
      I would like to send a postcard TO my familY and friends.
      My perfect weekend would spoil rain. - Moj idealny weekend zepsulby deszcz??
      to nie ma sensu nawet po polsku)
      Japan is A very interesing place. JAPANESE history is fascinating and its
      CULTURE is wonderfuL.

      Poprawilam spelling i niektore zwroty, czyli poszlam na latwizne. Zrob cos z
      tym Jimmu i z deszczem bo nijak nie ma sensu.

      :)
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