A Nice Summery Surprise - Can You check it ;-) ?

16.11.05, 20:38
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A Nice Summery Surprise

I remember it as today. It was summer and I was eleven years old. I was
boring deadly… All my friends went away somewhere: over sea, in mountains or
to grandparents, but I must stayed at home. On addition, I didn’t have sister
or brother and both my mother and father were working in spite of holidays.

When we had to going to Hungary as turned out that my mum was ill. She felt
bad and queer from several days, but then she felt splendidly. It was strange
and we didn’t know what happened, so she had to went to a doctor – there was
no question about it.

When my mother returned I saw a huge smile on her face. Immediately I
realized that it couldn’t be a bad news. My mum was pregnant. “You will be
have a little brother, soon” – she said. I couldn’t believe… “I will be have
a brother?” - I repeated with astonishment. Next, I was hugging her firmly.

I was dreaming about siblings and my dream came true. I was very happy. My
mother given birth in December. I have obtained brother on Christmas :). It
was the best present! Today, I’m eighteen years old and I have seven-years
old brother. Indescribable!
    • morith Re: A Nice Summery Surprise - Can You check it ;- 16.11.05, 20:57
      A Nice Summery Surprise

      I remember it as if it was today. It was summer and I was eleven years old. I
      was bored to death… All my friends had gone away: over the sea, to the mountains
      or to grandparents, but I had to stay at home. Aditionally, I didn’t have a sister
      or a brother and both, my mother and father, worked in spite of holidays.

      When we were to go to Hungary it turned out that my mum was ill. She felt
      bad and queer? moze lepiej she was not well for several days, but then she felt
      splendidly. It was strange and we didn’t know what had happened, so she had to
      go to a doctor – there was
      no question about it.

      When my mother returned I saw a huge smile on her face. Immediately I
      realized that it couldn’t be a bad news. My mum was pregnant. “You're going to
      have a little brother, soon” – she said. I couldn’t believe it… “I am going to
      have a brother” - I repeated in astonishment. Next, I hugged her firmly.

      I had been dreaming about siblings and my dream came true. I was very happy. My
      mother gave birth in December. I obtained a brother on Christmas :). It
      was the best present! Today, I’m eighteen years old and I have a seven year
      old brother. It's indescribable!

      Mysle, ze jest ok. Pozdrawiam
      Mor
      • russh Re: A Nice Summery Surprise - Can You check it ;- 16.11.05, 22:45
        A Nice Summery Surprise

        I remember it as if it was today. It was summer; I was eleven years old, and
        dead bored.

        All my friends had gone away: to the sea, mountains or their grandparents. I had
        to say at home, and to make things worse, I didn't have a sister or brother and
        both my mother & father were working.

        We were going to Hungary, but mum was ill. She felt sick for several days, and
        then wonderful. It was strange and we didn’t know the cause; she had to go to
        the doctor, no question about it.

        When my mother returned I saw a huge smile on her face. Immediately I realized
        that it couldn’t be bad news. She was pregnant! “You’ll have a little brother
        soon”, she said.

        I couldn’t believe it; “I’m going to have a little brother?”, I continued saying
        in astonishment. I gave her such a big hug. I had been dreaming about having a
        brother or sister and my dream had come true; I was so happy.

        My mother gave birth in December; I had a brother for Christmas - it was the
        best present ever!

        Now, I’m eighteen years old, and have a seven year-old brother. It’s an
        indescribable feeling.

        • russh Re: A Nice Summery Surprise - Can You check it ;- 16.11.05, 22:46
          Sorry,

          I had to stay at home (not say).
    • bbiedrooneczkaa Re: A Nice Summery Surprise - Can You check it ;- 17.11.05, 00:56
      Morith, Russh wielkie dzięki za pomoc! Pozdrawiam.
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