matka_chrzestna
16.02.06, 23:05
Proszę pomóżcie.
Czy możecie mi sprawdzić i poprawić błędy w mojej pracy z angielskiego?
Proszę, mam to na jutro.
A temat tej pracy brzmi:
„Bardzo często blisko nas żyją ludzie niezwykli. Opisz sąsiada/ sąsiadkę,
którego/którą podziwiasz”
Tomek Nowak is my neighbour from 18 years. I know him and his family from
always. This 40 year old man has wife and two children – Kasia and Bartek.
Many neighbours admire him for his diligence and sacrificing for our
neighbourly common.
Tomek is tall and slim. He has a unique style. He always has his opinion
about fashion. He must looks smart to the work because he is working in
office and is in contact with other people, so he often wears a suit. After
work Tomek wears comfortable and fashionable tracksuits. His children are
always neat and tidy.
Since when I remember Tomet always wear nice and kind. He knows a lot about
finances and therefore neighbours often ask him for filling up their tax
declaration. Tomek never refuse. Apart from that he knows a lot about cars.
Tomek doesn’t only repair his neighbours cars but he also advises them how
they can improve their car. His garage is always full of people.
In fact, Kasia’s father is a very good organizer and an administrator. He has
the minibus and once in month goes to the cinema or the theatre. He always
takes his neighbours and their children along. Everybody likes this trip.
Tomek likes very much DIY and he is well-know in the neighbourhood for it. He
is renovating something all the time. Thanks to many renovatins which my
neighbour made alone in his flat, he gain great experience. Now when somebody
wants to repair a room in a flat, he or she comes for advise to Tomek.
All in all, neighbours like Tomek because he is very friendly, helpful and
sociable. He has the vast knowledge and the outstanding intelligence, apart
from that he is very witty. He can amuse everyone. People admire Tomek he
isn’t only a neighbour but a close friend and an outstanding individual. I am
fortunate to be living next door to him.
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Matka Chrzestna