proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :)

27.09.06, 23:13
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proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :)
dziękuję :)

Some people believe, that our modern life style is very unhealthy. I agree
with this statement. But if it is truth, why we live longer than we did a
hundred years ago? I’ll try to explain my point of view about this matter.

Many people lead sedentary lifestyle, they are simply slobs. They don’t work
out in the gym and eat TV dinners. Couch potatoes don’t live as long as
fitness fanatics but they live longer than hundred years ago. Why?

Maybe the main reason is that they have very good health care. There are a
lot of medicines for different diseases nowadays. Health care centres have
got better educated and better prepare for work consultants.

Another thing is that we get plenty of sleep. This is very important in our
live and we should sleep as long as we must.

It is also true that we are generally happier. We’ve got loving families,
good friends, some nice pets, cars and other things.

In short we have got higher standard of living but if we don’t want to die on
a heart attack or stroke we should follow a sensible diet and keep fit. To
stay fit people must give up smoking, reduce stress, and take up sport and
brush teeth. If we’ll do it we could live even longer then now.


pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna ;)
    • ontarian matko chrzestna, kogo chcisz? hehe 28.09.06, 02:28
      matka_chrzestna napisała:

      > In short we have got higher standard of living but if we don’t want to
      > die on a heart attack or stroke we should follow
      napisalbym "from heart attack"
      reszta moze byc
    • kwiatek_leona Re: proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :) 28.09.06, 06:04
      Some people believe that our modern life style is very unhealthy. I agree
      with this statement. But if it is truth, why do we live longer than we did a
      hundred years ago? I’ll try to explain my point of view about this matter.

      Many people lead sedentary lifestyle, they are simply slobs. They don’t work
      out in the gym and eat TV dinners. Couch potatoes don’t live as long as
      fitness fanatics but they live longer than they would a hundred years ago. Why?

      Maybe the main reason is that they have a very good health care. There are a
      lot of medications for different diseases nowadays. Health care centers are
      staffed with better educated personell and are better prepared as the work
      consultants.

      Another thing is that we get plenty of sleep. This is very important in our
      live and we should sleep as long as we must.

      It is also true that we are generally happier. We’ve got loving families,
      good friends, some nice pets, cars and other things.

      In short we have got higher standard of living, but if we don’t want to die of
      a heart attack or stroke we should follow a sensible diet and keep fit. To
      stay fit people must give up smoking, reduce stress, and take up sport and
      brush teeth. If we’ll do that, we could live even longer.

      Co, nawet juz nie mozna zapalic? (poprawilam co moglam na chybcika, polecam
      zeby jeszcze sprawdzic, bo naprawde bylo na pniu...)
      • kwiatek_leona Re: proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :) 28.09.06, 06:10
        In short, we have

        Interpunkcja nie jest moja mocna strona...
        • matka_chrzestna Re: proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :) 28.09.06, 06:42
          dzięki :)
          • la_dolce_vita Re: proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :) 28.09.06, 11:20
            But if indeed this is the case, why do we live longer than we did a
            hundred years ago? I’ll try to explain my point of view on this matter.


            fitness fanatics but they do live longer than they would have a hundred years
            ago




            There is an array of medication for different diseases nowadays. Health care
            centres (centers is an american spelling) are
            staffed with highly educated personnel who are better equipped to work as
            consultants. (nie wiem czy o to ci chodzilo z tymi consultants)


            This is very important in our
            lives and we should sleep as long as we need.



            We have loving families, caring friends, household pets, cars and many other
            possessions.



            In short, we enjoy higher standard of living,



            a heart attack or a stroke


            If we would do that, we could live even longer.






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