bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie

16.01.07, 19:58
My name is xxx and I’m currently living in Poland. In August 2006 I completed a MSc degree in environmental protection studies at the Faculty of Biology and Earth Sciences at the University of Nicolaus Copernicus in Torun.
During the 5-year course of study I had the opportunity to get acquainted with different laboratory techniques used in microbiological, biochemical and chemical laboratories such as use of laboratory glassware, pH measurement, titration, culture media inoculation, autoclaving, centrifuging, solution preparation, etc. I have the experience in handling dangerous reagents and substances like concentrated acids or alkalis. Generally I am used to work in a busy laboratory environment. My command of English is good, for I have spent a lot of time practicing it. I reckon I would be a good employee and I could contribute to the Firm.
That is why I would like to apply for the job advertised on www.monster.co.uk regarding laboratory assistant. As a Polish citizen I am eligible to work in the UK legally without any work permits. I have been thinking about taking a job for some time abroad especially in the UK. Working as a laboratory assistant would be a great opportunity for me to start my new career.
Sir, if you are interested in my offer, please do not hesitate to inform me via e-mail, so I could make all the necessary preparations to meet you personally.


Witam. Mam gorąca prośbę o sprawdzenie powyższego tekstu. Za wytykanie wszelkich popełnionych błędów będe niezmiernie wdzięczny ;)
    • paper_mate Re: bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie 16.01.07, 20:16
      fabulous, little condescending but it mixes well with the stiff upper lip
      delivery
      • ascarissuis Re: bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie 16.01.07, 20:41
        Does that mean that all my efforts were not in vain after all ?| ;)
        • paper_mate Re: bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie 16.01.07, 21:30
          that's right
    • minimus Re: bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie 16.01.07, 22:17
      Generalnie jest ok, tym bardziej, że w takiej pracy nie musisz jakoś świetnie
      mówić po angielsku. Naniosłem parę poprawek tak na szybko.

      Powodzenia!

      P.S. Ale wrócisz do nas kiedyś?? Tutaj potrzeba dobrych ludzi :-))



      > My name is xxx and I’m currently living in Poland. In August 2006 I compl
      > eted a MSc degree in environmental protection studies at the Faculty of Biolog
      > y and Earth Sciences at the University of Nicolaus Copernicus in Torun.
      > During the 5-year course of study I had the opportunity to get acquainted with
      > different laboratory techniques used in microbiological, biochemical and chemi
      > cal laboratories such as use of laboratory glassware, pH measurement,
      titration
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      > tc. I have the experience in handling dangerous reagents and substances like
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      > ncentrated acids or alkalis. Generally I am used to work in a busy laboratory
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      > nvironment. MY WRITTEN AND SPOKEN ENGLISH WILL ALLOW ME TO COMMUNICATE AT A
      SATISFACTORY LEVEL. I AM CONVINVED I WOULD BRING ADDITIONAL VALUE TO YOUR
      COMPANY (to jakaś firma?)I would be a good employee and I could contribute to
      the Fi
      > rm.
      > That is why I would like to apply for the job advertised on www.monster.co.uk
      FOR A POSITION OF A laboratory assistant. As a Polish citizen I am eligible to
      work in the
      > UK legally without any work permits. I have been thinking about taking a job
      > for some time abroad especially in the UK. Working as a laboratory assistant
      wo
      > uld be a great opportunity for me to start my new career.
      > IF you are interested in my offer, please do not hesitate to inform me via
      > e-mail, so I could make all the necessary preparations to meet you personally.
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