cosmogirl3
19.04.08, 08:43
Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie czy poprawnie stosuje czasy i czy nie ma błędów.
Z góry dzieki;)
When I was a little girl I went with my parents at the sea. Every day we were
going to swim and sunbathe. I couldn't swim and my father decided to teache
me. I was very happy because I had an own lifebelt.
One day I wanted to try swimming without the lifebelt. The sea was cold but
very calm. My first time was good. I was swiming all day when unexpectedly
appeared some very large waves. I drowned and I called for help. My father
swam to me but the waves were stronger and bigger.
At some time I disappeared under the water and I couldn't surface. I was
terrified. The water flowed to my ears. I didn't see anything and I drank a
lot of water.
Suddenly I was feeling how somebody pulled out me. It was my father. He helped
me to swam to the seashore.
I don't remember that accident because it was terrible for me. For thet time I
scare swimming while on the sea there are waves.