Proszę o sprawdzenie trzech opisów osób

14.02.09, 13:53
Witam
Chciałbym się dowiedzieć czy coś z tymi opisami jest nie tak zanim to
przepiszę na czysto. Dziękuję za ewentualne sugestie :)

Morisa - She moved to Italy with her parents when she was a teenager. After
that she started to learn Italian. She took Italian classes. She went to
evening classes, but she didn't like it too much, so she drop out of school.
Next she started to learn English. She met there a nice boy and she went out
with an Italian speaker.

Musa - Firstly, she began to learn Zulu. After 7 years she started to learn
English. At this time Nelson Mandela went out prison and she stopped to learn
Zulu. Next he began to learn Afrikaans, but she learnt not to long it. I can't
remember why she stopped learning Afrikaans, but after that she started to
learn Afrikaans again.

Asif's mother - She came to Britain when she was young girl. She started to
learn English, but she had to resigned, because she worked very hard with her
husband and she hadn't time for learn. Between this time she raised a family.
After 20 years she found time to learn and now she is learning to speak
English quite well.
    • karul opisy 16.02.09, 04:06
      Morisa - "she took Italian ..." jest zbedne; "she dropped
      out"; "next,", "she met a nice boy there and is now going out with
      an Italian speaker".

      Musa - "NM was freed from prison and ..."; "next,"; "but he did not
      learn it for long"; is Musa a woman or a man?

      Asif's mother - "but she had to stop"; "in-between, she raised"; if
      she is learning to speak English now, how do you know she is
      speaking "quite well"?
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