Czy to dobrze??

IP: 213.199.213.* 18.11.03, 22:49
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing regarding your advertisement in the Gazeta Wyborcza on 1st
April. I am very interested in Whitewater Rafting Trip and I will be very
grateful if you could anwesr a few questions.
Your advertisement states that the price includes a rafting equipment. will
i have waterproof clothing? The advertisement mentions that the price
includes food & camping equipment. Will I have my own sleeping bag, or i
will have to have my private sleeping bag? In addiction, regarding the
professional guides that the price includes, how many (will??) guides per
group? Finally, how long is transportation to & from the river from Denver?
thank you for help. I look from to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
................
    • Gość: etbl Re: Czy to dobrze?? IP: *.2-136-217.adsl.skynet.be 18.11.03, 23:44
      Prawie dobrze. Niewiele bledow.

      line 2: "on April,1-st" or "on the 1-st of April"

      line 4: answer

      line 7: Is a sleeping bag included, or do I have to bring my own sleeping bag?

      line 8: in addition, regarding the professional guides, that are included in
      the price, how many will there be per group?

      line 10: Finally, how long does the transport(ation) from Denver to the river
      and back take?

      line 11: Thank you for your help. I am looking forward to hearing from you

      pozdrowienia
    • Gość: Szybki Re: Czy to dobrze?? IP: *.proxy.aol.com 19.11.03, 06:20
      Linia 7 ( jak sie nie myle to z pewnoscia powinno byc napisane "Addition"a nie
      addiction).
      Linia 3 mysle ze powinno byc answer a nie anwesr.
      • Gość: biedak Re: Czy to dobrze?? IP: 213.199.213.* 19.11.03, 06:34
        dzięki
    • tynski Re: Czy to dobrze?? 19.11.03, 08:39
      I am very interested in the whitewater-rafting trip advertised in the Gazeta
      Wyborcza of April 1.
      I understand that the price includes food, rafting equipment, and camping gear.

      Please elaborate on the details:
      1. Do you provide waterproof clothing and sleeping bags for (paying?) rafters?/
      (professional guides?)
      2. How many professional guides are assigned to each group?
      3. How long does it take to transfer from Denver to the river?

      I look forward to hearing from you,
      ...
    • kociamama Re: Czy to dobrze?? 19.11.03, 10:44
      I am interested. (Erase this very as it's inappropriate for the formal
      register)
      the same: very grateful - extremely grateful, most grateful, grateful
      the price includes rafting equipment
      don't write abbreviations like & but full words - and
      is waterproof clothing available or do I have to arrange it myself?
      Do I have to bring my own sleeping bag or is it included?/provided by the
      organizers?
      What is the number of guides in charge of each group?
      How long does it take to travel to the river from Denver?
      I would be glad to obtain this information.
      I look forward to hearing from you. (look for formal writing/ am looking for
      informal)

      That's how I'd write at leats;))

      Kociamama.
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