Can you help me...

[okretka_nascie]

...and correct the mistakes in two letters?


The first one:

Dear K.,
It's now just two weeks and I'll be with you. I cannot believe it! I'm
looking forward very much to stay with you and your family and see London for
the first time. I'm very excited.
My city, Sao Paulo, is the biggest and the noisiest city in Brasil. It's not
very good for tourist because it'c more commercial city. It also has very
much traffic and pollution. Maybe London has the same. I like the most here
in Sao Paulo the entertainment. You can find good bars and restaurants, which
don't close until the last customer leaves. My friend T. was in London the
last year and he went to the theatre to see 'The buddy Holly story'. He told
me it had been wonderful. I would also like to see it.
My plane will arrive to H., Terminal 3 at 6.30 a.m. It is very kind of you to
meet me so early in the morning!
Thank you.
I hope very much to improve my English when I come to London.
See you soon and Happy New Year!
F.

[okretka_nascie]

...and the second one:


Dear S.,
In just one week you will be here with me in Switzerland. I want you to meet my
family and I will schow you my city. I hope you will like it. Basel is not as
big city as London but there's everything clean and it's very close the
mountains, which are beautiful. I am worried that you will find Basel a little
boring. It isn't as exciting as London because the street are very quiet after
6 o'clock at night. The people live in flats so they cannot make a lot of
noise. There is a museum but perhaps it isn't very interesting to see.
We finished school the last week and I'm enjoying the holiday. My family
doesn't speak English so you will practise your German a lot. I would also like
to practise my English with you.
See you the next week! I will come at the airport to meet you.
Love,
L.

[mudzyn7]

Basel is not as big city as London but there's everything clean and it's very close the mountains, which are beautiful.
Basel is not as big city as London is, but it's very clean and close to the mountines, which are beautiful by the way.

We finished school the last week
leave the "the"

I will come at the airport to meet you.
I will come to the airport...
M.

[mudzyn7]

I will be at the airport...

[mudzyn7]

It's now just two weeks and I'll be with you.
Two more weeks and I'll be with you.
because it'c more commercial city
because it's more like an industrial city (I don't know St.Paulo, so commercial could be ok)
It also has very much traffic and pollution.
It also has a lot of traffic and pollution.
I like the most here in Sao Paulo the entertainment.
The thing I like the most here is the entertaiment
He told me it had been wonderful.
He told me it was wonderful. (I think)
I hope very much to improve my English when I come to London.
I really hope that my English will improve when I come and live in London.