a to? jak przetłumaczycie?

[jagoda2]

The loneliness, it wears me out, it lies in way. Samotność wyczerpuje mnie,
ale co dalej?
And on our lost till in my eyes - za to nie wiem, jak się zabrać

weird english

[fat_pig]

your examples seem pure mumbo jumbo.
i suspect there are major problems with some of the verbal phrases used in those
'sentences'. for example, i don't know what 'it lies in way' means, in
conjunction with the rest of that first sentence. my best guess is that the last
phrase should be 'lies in wait', meaning it (loneliness, or detachment or
inability to coop with the outside) stands always ready to attack (the speaker).
similar with the second example: 'till in my eyes' what? weird english.

[venus22]

Now life is sweet
And what it brings
I tried to take
But loneliness
It wears me out
It lies in way

And all not lost
Still in my eyes
The shadow of necklace
Across your thigh


it's from REM song Leaving New York

Venus

[venus22]

supposedly there is another, correct version:

Now life is sweet, and what it brings
I tried to take.
the loneliness it wears me out,
it lies in wake.
and all I've lost, you're in my eyes,
shatter a necklace across your thighs
i might've lived my life in a dream
but i swear it, this is real
and you refuse, and it shatters like glass
mercurial future, forget the past,
but it's you, it's what I feel