Sprawdzi ktos?Prosze:)

[tykota]

In my city is many Fast Food restaurantoften in big city and cinema.I think
people go to thete to relax,spending time with friends and eating
something.Food there is not expensive, good and fast.I care about my bealthy
and I don/t like very hamburger, crips cola etc.But sometimes I eating this
food becouse I don't have time to cookingsomethime else.I know about
hamburger are fat and unbealthy,so I seldom go there.Hamburger is tinned
food, it have many calories and I think is to bad for children.Fast food
become are addicted,so..I don't like Fast Food.

[malgosia1983]

There is a lot of Fast Food restaurants in my city. I think people go there to
relax, spend some spare (wolny) time with friends and of course to taste
offered meals(serowowane potrawy). What is important food isn't expensive and
easy to get.
I care about my health so I usually don't eat hamburgers, crisps or drink cola
etc. It happens that I buy this kind of food because of the lack (brak) of time
to cook. I know exactly(dokładnie) the unhealthy quality(jakość)of it so i try
not to eat it so often. Hamburgers are tinned (nie znam słówka - konserwowany?)
food, fattening (have many callories) and should not be a part of children diet
(nie powinien być czescią diety dzieci).
The problem is that eating fast food you can become addictted of it.
That's why i do not like Fast Food

[tykota]

tak tinned to konserwowany :-)wziełam to z słownika.

[tecit]

This is a good start.
Without changing much of what you wrote (although it is appropriate) this is
what I propose:
I live in a large city where there are many “fast food” restaurants and movie
theaters. People go to these places/establishments to relax, spend time with
friends and eat. The food is not expensive; it is tasty and served quickly. I
care about my health and I don’t like hamburgers, crisps/chips/fries (have your
pick) and cola, but sometimes I eat “fast food” because I don’t have time to
cook. I know that hamburgers are unhealthy, filled with calories and I seldom
eat them. I think they are bad for children. Furthermore, “fast food” is
addictive and I don’t like it.

[tecit]

In regards to my previous post - I meant to say: this is a good start TYKOTA!

[tykota]

Thank you ;-)

[mudzyn7]

I live in a large city, and in any large city there are many "fast food" restaurants and movie theatres.
We all go there to relax, spend some time with friends and eat.
The prices are not bad and the food is served quickly.
Although I care about my health, a hamburger with fries plus a Coke from time to time is not going to hurt.

Anything is addictive, I drink, I smoke, I smoke the other thing, don't really eat that much of a fast food, but when I do, I like it.