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[olga_1234]

Christmas is in general a very happy and cheerful time. Many families get
together to spent the exceptional time in a family circle. The preparations
for this celebrations take the most time. People are so busy all the year
round that they forget about the most important things and Christmas is the
time when they recollect their family members. Christmas is the contemplative
time as it forces us to refelctions. I really regret that Christmas occurs
only once a year. We ought to remember about their closests all the time and
not only on this one day. People who are infirm and lonely don't celebrate
Christmas because they don't have anybody they couldn't share their problems
and happyness with.

Pozdro i szczesliwych swiat!!

[gizmoj]

> Christmas is in general a very happy and cheerful time.

Christmas,in general, is a ................... time.

> Many families get together to spent the exceptional time in a family circle.

Many families get together to spend the time with each other.(just my opinion)

> The preparations for this celebrations take the most time.

The preparations for this celebration takes the most time.

> People are so busy all the year round that they forget about the most
important things and Christmas is the time when they recollect their family
members.

People are so busy all year round that they forget about the most important
things in life, and Christmas is the time(or a time) to reflect.(Sorry about
changing your sentence.) OR Christmas is the time(or a time) to reconnect with
the family members.

> Christmas is the contemplative time as it forces us to refelctions.

I would leave this sentence out since it's redundant. But if you
insist, "Contemplative time" doesn't sound good. "... forces us to
reflections" would have to be changed to "forces us to reflect".

> I really regret that Christmas occurs only once a year.

Ok. (But we do have New Year's Day, Easter, Birthdays, etc. when families get
together. No?).

> We ought to remember about their closests all the time and ....

Rewrite this sentence. It doesn't sound good. Suggestion: We ought to
remember our closest family members and friends all the time and not only
during Christmas (time). (Still doesn't sound good to me.)

> People who are infirm and lonely don't celebrate Christmas because they don't
have anybody they couldn't share their problems and happyness with.

Ouch!!! "People who are infirm and lonely..."?

How about: People who are alone in the world don't celebrate Christmas because
they don't have anybody to share their problems and happiness with."
Or "...they have nobody to share......"

Hope some English major will clean up this mess and make it better still. I
failed English when I was a child (hee, hee!)

Wesolych Swiat!!!

[gizmoj]

Ups!!! I wrote: The preparations for this celebration takes the most time.

Should be: The ...................................take ........time.

[gizmoj]

You're welcome, Olga. Looking forward to help you again (NOT!)