Angielski i wypracowanie

[kasienkaxp]

Heej. Sorry, że tak późno. Mam napisac wypracowanie z angielskiego na temat
"Wąsewo 80 years ago" . Możecie mi sprawdzić błędy, albo coś podpowiedzieć.?. <<
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My family village it's Wąsewo . Wąsewo 80 years ago it was boring. There
weren't lot of interesting things. People rode horses. There was a big bank,
but there wasn't a big shop. People on Sunday went to church. Then they ate
lunch with his family vases. Children were playing on the streets. I think
that Wąsewo 80 years ago it was boring , but I love my village. Now she is
very interesting.


Heelp xD

[kara4454]

[kasienkaxp]

szkoda ;/

Bardzo ważne jest to wypracowanie ;/

[lena_]

Wąsewo is my family village . 80 years ago it was boring. There
weren't lot of interesting things. People rode horses. There was a big bank,
but there wasn't a big shop. People on Sunday went to church. Then they ate
lunch with his family vases. Children were playing on the streets. I think
that Wąsewo 80 years ago it was boring <-napisałaś to samo w drugim zdaniu : )
, but I love my village. Now it is very interesting.


mam nadzieje, że dobrze poprawiłam, ale szkoda, że nie widziałam tego wczoraj : )
jeśli to było na dzisiaj, to co dostałaś?

[rathbone]

My family village is Wąsewo . It was boring 80 years ago. There
weren't lot of interesting things. People rode horses. There was a big bank,
but there wasn't a big shop. People went to church on Sunday. Then they ate
lunch with his family vases. Children were playing on the streets. I think
that Wąsewo was boring 80 years ago , but I love my village. Now it is
very interesting.

myśle ze w tych pogrubionych miejscach są błędy i chyba tak jak poprawiłam to
jest dobrze ; )