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can anyody check an informal letter?

19.01.06, 22:14
Dear Isabel

It was great to hear from you. I 'm really sorry I haven't written sooner but
I've just started a car driving course, so I don't have enought leisure time.

I can only imagine how you are busy now. Prepairing to exams is such
time-consuming! Please let me now how you deal with it. In regard to my
problem, I had managed to sort out it! However thanks for your offer.

My First Certificate studies are going well. I have only problem with
listening, but I hope to solve it. My dream is to be fluent in English, that's
why I'd like to do an advanced course in the UK next summer. Of course, I'll
find any time off to visit you! Big thanks for your invitation. You must also
visit me here, in Poland!

Anyway, I'd be better close now as I've got a lot of homework.
Give my regards to your parents.

Take care






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    • zglaszam_sie Sprobuje Ci pomoc... 19.01.06, 22:39
      Not bad at all. Powiedzialbym nawet, ze bardzo dobrze.

      Spelling:
      “enough” not “enought”
      “preparing” not “prepairing”

      Grammar:
      “I have only problems with listening…” better “The only problems I have right
      now are those with listening…”
      “Prepairing to exams is such time-consuming…” better “All those preparations
      for exams are such time consuming tasks…”
      • pestka86 Re: Sprobuje Ci pomoc... 19.01.06, 22:54
        thank YOU very much:*
        • zglaszam_sie Re: Sprobuje Ci pomoc... 19.01.06, 23:00
          My pleasure. :)))
    • kasiasmom Re: can anyody check an informal letter? 19.01.06, 23:07
      Bardzo piekny list. "Preparing to exams is so time consuming!" would sound less
      formal to me , than the offered solution. I jeszcze tylko "I'll find some time
      off".
      • pestka86 another question:) 19.01.06, 23:19
        >to kasiasmom: Thanks:) I've just correct it:)

        How can I say:

        To miasto z duszą, które doskonale pasuje do mojej melancholijnej natury (mniej
        wiecej taki kontekst;)

        It's a city with soul, that suits excellent to my melancholic human nature.
        (mam objekcje co do brzemienia ;)
      • zglaszam_sie Re: can anyody check an informal letter? 19.01.06, 23:34
        Bardzo piekny list. " would sound less
        formal to me , than the offered solution. I jeszcze tylko "I'll find some time
        off".
        ********************************************************************************
        "Preparing to exams is so time consuming!"
        Jak juz to: "Preparing FOR exams..." - to on sie przygotowuje do egzaminow,
        ktore ma zdawac, a nie przygotowje egzaminow, ktore ktos ma zdawac.
        • pestka86 Re: can anyody check an informal letter? 20.01.06, 00:06
          akurat to zdanie przerobiłam zgodnie z Twoja sugestią:)))

        • kasiasmom Re: can anyody check an informal letter? 20.01.06, 01:32
          Swieta racja.
    • ms.jones Re: can anyody check an informal letter? 20.01.06, 01:14
      >I've just started a car driving course
      I've just started my driving lessons (UK)

      > I can only imagine how you are busy now.
      I can only imagine how busy you are now.

      preparing FOR exams is SO...juz bylo

      >Please let me now how you deal with it.
      Please let me know how you are getting on.

      >However thanks for your offer.
      ..I HAVE managed to sort it out! Thanks for your offer of help/to help, I
      really appreciate it.

      a problem with listening juz byl

      Of course, I'll
      > find any time off to visit you!
      of course, I'll find time to visit you! (find/have time)

      > Give my regards to your parents.
      Please, give my regards (...)

      These are only minor changes, the letter is beautiful anyway :)





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