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[matka_chrzestna]

Witam :)
proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej pracy ;)
... no i o komentarze też oczywiście :)

In our present world there are a lot of contrivances. People still find out
new useful things, which help us to live. For me the most important
contemporary invitation is Internet.

Internet is a bit different from other invitations because you cannot touch
it and you will not be able to use it without proper computer hardware. World
Wide Web has a really big influence on my life.

First of all, it is a place where you can find information on topic
interesting for you, because there are dictionaries, encyclopedias and
thematic web pages. It is a big library, where you may choose everything
sitting comfortable at home. I like doing my homework by using Internet.

Secondly, in network you can buy whatever you want. There are also some
auctions where you can buy or sell different goods. Lately I could not find a
book in bookshop so I decided to order it. I was very happy from deliver
because everything progressed very well.

What is more, Internet is a way to keep in touch with my friends. Thanks to
different message communicators I am able to leave and get word. People who
like discussing on specific subject, should use different forums. It is a
great fun because you exchange your views with other people.

I think that I am a little bit addicted from net because when I am at home I
use it all the time. I do everything only clicking on mouse and I really like
it.

dzięki ;)
pozdrawiam :D
Matka Chrzestna 8)

[mudzyn7]

. For me the most important
contemporary invitation is Internet.

Chyba mialas na mysli invention?

tak invention

[matka_chrzestna]

tak invention :)

a jakieś jeszcze uwagi?

[mudzyn7]

In our present world there are a lot of contrivances. People still find out
new useful things, which help us to live. For me the most important
contemporary invitation is Internet.

Internet is a bit different from other invitations because you cannot touch
it and you will not be able to use it without proper computer hardware. World
Wide Web has a really big influence on my life.

First of all, it is a place where you can find information on topic
interesting for you, because there are dictionaries, encyclopedias and
thematic web pages. It is a big library, where you may choose everything
sitting comfortable at home. I like doing my homework by using Internet.

Secondly, in network you can buy whatever you want. There are also some
auctions where you can buy or sell different goods. Lately I could not find a
book in bookshop so I decided to order it. I was very happy from deliver
because everything progressed very well.

What is more, Internet is a way to keep in touch with my friends. Thanks to
different message communicators I am able to leave and get word. People who
like discussing on specific subject, should use different forums. It is a
great fun because you exchange your views with other people.

I think that I am a little bit addicted from net because when I am at home I
use it all the time. I do everything only clicking on mouse and I really like
it.

Nie zmieniajac Twojego stylu pisania, w koncu kazdy ma swoj styl:

>World Wide Web has a really big influence on my life.
World Wide Web has really big influence on my life.

First of all, it is a place where you can find information on topic
interesting for you, because there are dictionaries, encyclopedias and
thematic web pages. It is a big library, where you may choose everything
sitting comfortable at home. I like doing my homework by using Internet.

First of all, it is a place where you can find information on any topic you are interested in. There are dictionaries, encyclopedias and thematic web pages.
It is a big library, where you may choose everything ...

Secondly, in network you can buy whatever you want. There are also some
auctions where you can buy or sell different goods. Lately I could not find a
book in bookshop so I decided to order it. I was very happy from deliver
because everything progressed very well.

Secondly, on line (or on the network, if You must)you...
Lately or recently I was not able to find a book in a bookshop, so I decided to order it on line. I was very pleased with the quickness of the delivery and everything progressed very well.

What is more, Internet is a way to keep in touch with my friends. Thanks to
different message communicators I am able to leave and get word.

In addition, Internet is a way ...
Thanks to
different message communicators I am able to leave and receive the news (or something else)

Ogolnie jest super, ale jak powiedzialem kazdy ma swoj sposob pisania.

[hanula]

> >World Wide Web has a really big influence on my life.
> World Wide Web has really big influence on my life.

*A* big influence.

> Secondly, on line

*online* (sp.)

> (or on the network, if You must)

No, you mustn't. "Net" is a synonym of "Internet", "network" isn't.
And don't capitalize "you" in English in the middle of sentences.

> order it on line.

*online*

> I was very pleased with the quickness of the delivery
> and everything progressed very well.

There's nothing wrong with this sentence gramatically, the only problem is it sounds awfully awkward. Much like a translation from Polish.

> leave and receive the news (or something else)

Something else, presumably, I doubt that she gets the news from Gadu Gadu.

> Ogolnie jest super

To zależy od definicji "super"...

[hanula]

> People still find out
> new useful things

Nie "find out". Rozumiem, że chcesz uniknąć powtarzania "invent", ale niestety tutaj tylko ten czasownik pasuje. Ewentualnie, w nieformalnym rejestrze: "People are always coming up with new useful things which help us to live". Z tym że ta druga część zdania nie jest najpiękniejsza. Hmmm.
"The world is already full of various gadgets and contrivances, and still people keep inventing, looking for ways of improving our lives."

> First of all, it is a place where you can find information on topic

topics

> interesting for you, because there are dictionaries,

there are, but where?
because it contains dictionaries...
because it allows you to access online dictionaries...

> thematic web pages. It is a big library, where you may choose everything

"choose everything" is too vague, too general. Be more specific.

> sitting comfortable at home. I like doing my homework by using Internet.

Yes, that shows. ;-) "I like doing my homework using the Internet."

> Secondly, in network you can buy whatever you want.

"Network" is not the same as "Internet". Don't use it as a synonym. "Secondly, on the Internet you can buy..." Or: "Secondly, these days you can do all your shopping online."

> Secondly, in network you can buy whatever you want. There are also some
> auctions where you can buy or sell different goods. Lately I could not find a
> book in bookshop so I decided to order it. I was very happy from deliver
> because everything progressed very well.

I don't like this paragraph. I don't like the "also" at the beginning: auctions are one way of doing shopping, not something separate from shopping, if you know what I mean. Then you talk about buying in a bookshop and ordering - was it an internet bookshop? Did you order it online?

> I was very happy from deliver
> because everything progressed very well.

Everything went very well and I was very happy with my purchase.

> different message communicators I am able to leave and get word.

"Leave and get word"? Not good.

> like discussing on specific subject, should use different forums.

discussing specific subjects
lose the comma
why "should"? can use internet forums - why "different", different from what?

> It is a
> great fun

No, it's not. "It is great fun" without an article.

> I think that I am a little bit addicted from net

addicted TO THE Net

> I do everything only clicking on mouse

Are you sure you do absolutely EVERYTHING just using your mouse?

[jimpres]

I would use the following:
People continually discover new usefull inventions which make life a little
easier to live.
The World Wide Web.......
Topics that are interesting to you .........
....choose everything sitting comfortably at home.
Secondly, on the internet......
...different message software communication applications I am.......
People who like discussing specific subjects can find appropriate forums.
I think I am a little bit addicted to the net .....

Pozdrawiam,

Kuba

[efedra]

jimpres napisał:

> People ... discover new usefull inventions which make life a little
> easier to live.

Discover new inventions???
Make life easier to live???

[hanula]

> Discover new inventions???

That's a good point too: you *make* inventions or *come up with* them, you don't *discover* them. Consider the difference between "odkryć" and "wynaleźć" in Polish.

[hanula]

> People continually discover new usefull

useful

> which make life a little
> easier to live.

Why make it so wordy? "make life a little easier" is just fine.

> ...different message software communication applications I am.......

Oh, come on. Message software communication applications? Type it in Google and see how many people use this phrase.

[steph13]

You do not 'discover' new inventions. People come up with/introduce/work on/new
inventions.