do polishbellydancer i doris-ek

[magdamajewski]

przegladalam wyszukiwarke bo potrzebuje zaproszenia dla brata i natknelam sie na watke w ktorym radzilyscie o napisanie listu zamiast zaproszenia, czy nadla posiadace kopie tego listu? Jesli tak to czy moglabym prosic o jego kopie na gazetowy e-mail? Bardzo dziekuje za pomoc.
magda

[olensia]

magdamajewski wyjelas mi to z ust :) ja tez takiego listu poszukuje czy ja tez
moglabym prosic na email gazetowy?? Z gory dziekuje :))

[polishbellydancer]

April 23, 2006
123 Sunset Street
New York, NY




Consulate General of the United States
Krakow, Poland


Dear Honorable Consul:

My name is John Smith, and I reside at 123 Sunset Street,New York, NY.
I am a United States citizen. I am requesting that you issue a tourist visa to
Barbara Kowalska in order to allow her to visit me and my wife, Anna, in the
United States.

Barbara is my wife's sister. During her stay here, she will get an opportunity
to see and experience the western culture, meet different kinds of people and
different variety of food. She will also enjoy the nice weather and the nice
city we live in.

Barbara will be visiting us from May to June. During her stay in the United
States, she will stay with me and my wife at our house, at the address stated
above. We will have a nice time together. We will be responsible for all of her
expenses while she is in the United States. When her visit is over, she will
return to Poland.

Barbara will be presenting this letter to you, together with other evidence to
establish her close ties to her country, and to assure you that she will return
prior to the expiration of her stay in the United States.


Your kind consideration to this request will be greatly appreciated.





Sincerely,

Jahn Smith


Pozmieniajcie jak wam pasuje. Dobrze dolaczyc wasza lub mezowa kopie paszportu,
ID, zielonej karty czy co tam macie. Powodzenia :o)

[olensia]

bardzo dziekuje :)

[magdamajewski]

ja tez bardzo dziekuje

bad English

[takietam1]

z tekstu:

"Barbara is my wife's sister. During her stay here, she will get an opportunity
to see and experience the western culture, meet different kinds of people and
different variety of food. She will also enjoy the nice weather and the nice
city we live in."


wywalic "kinds of" - - zostawic "different people" - od biedy przejdzie.
Ale "different variety of food" wywalic w calosci i bez zalu.
Sprzed "nice weather" wywalic "the".



Ogolnie ladny list i takie incjatywy nalezy popierac ale to powinno pozostawac w
tonie powagi i konsul czytajac to, nie powinien od razu dostawac napadu smiechu,
ani tym bardziej miec odczucia, ze sobie z niego jaja robimy.

Mozliwe, ze w tekscie sa jeszcze inne bledy, ale mnie najbardziej zrazily te
wymienione.


pozdrawiam.

[polishbellydancer]

alez oczywiscie--bo w konsulacie same wybitne jednostki ;o)

a tak na serio--to forme tego listu dostalam od przyjaciolki, ktorej siostra i
tato dosali wizy bez problemu--to samo zaproszenie sprawilo, ze moja siostra i
moi rodzice(pojechli do ambasady razem) rowniez dostali wizy--list moze z
drobnymi bledami ale przynoszacy szczescie

[takietam1]

o rany,
ale przeciez to wspanialy list.
ja tylko chcialem troche pomoc, aby list byl jeszcze wspanialszy.
szczescie najwazniejsze.-))

[polishbellydancer]

;o)