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[leopoldyna]

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January 29th 2007

Oceanview Advantures
PO Box 108 Clarksville
TN 37041

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have read in a magazine your advertisement about students summer holiday in
Orlando, organised by your agency. As I am interested in a journey to the
USA, I would like to ask you for some more details.
Could you write me first where Orlando is exactly and what kind of place it
is. Is it big or rather small? Are there any interesting places to visit?
Apart from that I would like to receive more information about other
participants. Write me, please, from which countries other students come and
if they can speak English.
It is also important to me to know the full cost of the stay. Is the visit of
Tour Disney World and other places mentioned in your advertisement included
in the price of the holiday? If not, how much does it cost?
Finally I demand you to write me the possible dates. It is necessary in order
that I could arrange my whole summer holiday.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Barbara Gacek

[mizzmarymary]

www.orlandoinfo.com/

[leopoldyna]

Thanks, Mizzmarymary.
But it is nor a real letter I wanted to send. It's just a kind of witten
exercise. Thank you for your all remarks. Your letter is perfect, it is not my
level yet.
However could you, or any other person, check my letter and write me mystakes,
apart from "demand". I would be very grateful.