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[matka_chrzestna]

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I think that literary figure witch I could make friends with is the Little
Prince. He is the main and title hero in story written by Antoine Saint-
Exupery. The Little Prince was a small boy who was living only with rose on
his own planet, called B612. One day he left his world and started travelling
across the galaxy meeting various planets. During this travels we meet this
small boy his thoughts, wishes, and wiseness.

I would like to meet Little Prince on my road because he was very life
intelligent and I would like to learn something from him. He was also just
like me looking for a real friend for good and bad times who could understand
him. So I know that I could be that kind of friend, and I guess he get me
back the same friendship.

I sometimes think that me and Little Prince are similar because we have very
reflection nature and we are more sensitive than ordinary people. So we have
a lot in common. For that reason we will probably get on well witch each
other.

I would also have someone I can rely on, trust and tell my considerations.
The Little Prince would be an ideal homie because he knew that it is only
with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to
the eye.

[englishmaninnewyork]

I think that literary figure WHICH I could make friends with, is the Little
Prince. He is the main and title hero in THE story written by Antoine DE Saint-
Exupery. The Little Prince was a small boy who was living (lepiej LIVED) only
with A rose on
his own planet, called B612. One day he left his world and started travelling
across the galaxy meeting (zdecyd. lepiej VISITING) various planets. During
this travels we meet
(WYKREŚLIŁEM, BO TROCHĘ BEZ SENSU) his thoughts, wishes, and wiseness.

I would like to meet Little Prince on my road because he was very life
intelligent ( MOŻE LEPIEJ DAĆ "EXPERIENCED"...) and I would like to learn
something from him. He was also just (zbyt informal, lepiej usunąć)
like me looking for a real friend for good and bad times ,who could understand
him. So I know that I could be that kind of friend, and I guess he get me
back the same friendship.

I sometimes think that me and Little Prince are similar because we have very
reflection (REFLECTIVE -chyba :) nature and we are more sensitive than ordinary
people. So we have
a lot in common. For that reason we will probably get on well WITCH (co ty z tą
czarownicą??? ://) each
other.

I would also have someone I can rely on, trust and tell my considerations.
The Little Prince would be an ideal homie (zbyt informal) because he knew that
only
with the heart one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to
the eye.

Trochę nudny i mętny, może na 3- :P
Sorry za ew. błędy (mogły zostać), sprawdzałem to przez minutę.

poprawka

[englishmaninnewyork]

WHICH (co ty z tą czarownicą? :/)
:D

[englishmaninnewyork]

Nie ma za co :)

dzieki za pomoc

[matka_chrzestna]

dzieki, buziaczki ;) :*

[englishmaninnewyork]

PS. Po co ci te wypracowania?

[matka_chrzestna]

uczę się do matury, a już mało czasu zostało....

dzięki za wszystko :)