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angielski-pomoc

23.09.10, 19:05
do osób znajacych angielski możecie mi powiedzieć czyt ten list nie zawiera błędów how
are you. I'm feeling good
I'm started my school exactly one month ago
this class is a very important to me
we make 2nd and 3 th class in one school year
it's difficult but I've got to be the best my class is really nice
my class are composed by 15 persons
they come from different country's
i met one girl she likes the same thing all me i mean muse and twilight
probable you wanna ask me about the concert of muse in Poland so i wasn't
i read on net that the concert was amazing
that was their second concert in Poland
I never forgive myself why I was not there
the concert was 21 but I had to be already in the school because I started a new school
year soon
I envy those people that were there
I'm try to visit London soon but I have no time
regret me
I can not stop thinking about you and about the times we spent together
you're my guiding light and all the best I ever got prosze to ważne to mój esej
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    • suoik zawiera. 23.09.10, 19:25
      I met one girl. She likes the same thingS AS ME. (tak mi się wydaję, że powinno
      być AS ME, a nie ALL ME.)
      I read on THE INTERnet that the concert was amazing.
      I never forgive myself THAT I WASN'T HERE.
      FORGIVE ME (to bardziej pasuje niż regret me.)
      a reszta chyba dobrze. poprawiłam co nie co wink
      • schokobonsy Re: zawiera. 23.09.10, 20:23
        Coś masz źle . Wejdź w google w tłumacza i przetłumacz te swoje polskie zdanie
        na angielski.
    • michaelmontana Poporawiona Wersja 23.09.10, 21:02
      how
      are you. I'm good
      I came back to my school exactly one month ago.
      this class is a very important to me.
      we make 2nd and 3 th class in one school year (???)
      it's difficult beacuse I want to be the best in my class. It is really nice.
      my class composes 15 persons.
      they come from different country's
      i met one girl. she likes the same thing like me. I'm talking about muse and
      twilight.
      probable you want to ( nie stosuj wanna !!!! to tylko w piosenkach robią )
      ask me about the concert of muse in Poland, so i wasn't.
      i read on the Net ( koniecznie Net z dużej ) that this concert was amazing.
      It was their second concert in Poland
      I've ( I have) never forgive myself that I was not there.
      the concert was 21 but I had to be in the school same time, because I
      started a new school year.

      I enjoy those poeople were there
      I'm trying to visiting London soon but I have no time.
      regret me
      I can not stop thinking about you and about the times we spent together
      you're my guiding light and all the best I ever got .. Brakuje jakiegoś
      zakończenia..
    • insidelia Re: angielski-pomoc 28.09.10, 00:17
      How are you? I'm good, thank you.
      I started my school exactly one month ago.
      This class is very important to me.
      we make 2nd and 3 th class in one school year -

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