Prośba o sprawdzenie

[leopoldyna]

Gdyby ktoś był tak miły, rzucił okiem i zwrócił mi uwagę na (poprawił) choć
niektóre moje błędy, byłabym bardzo wdzięczna. Z góry dziękuję ludziom dobrej
woli.

What steps can ordinary people take to help protect the environment?

Some people believe that ordinary people can do nothing really
important to protect the environment. In my opinion it definitely is not
true. Not only governments and ecological organisations, but each person all
over the world are responsible for the environment and can protect it.
In my view the most important is to be conscious of that. People
should understand that every day habits influence the state of the nature.
Our small steps are meaningful.
If we thought about that, we would choose the products or actions
more friendly for our environment. For instance, doing shopping we would
rather use sacks and bottles of many times than disposable plastic sacks or
cans. We would also prefer public transport than our own car in order to
pollute less. Another action necessary to take is selection of rubbish in
this way that the most of them could be recycled.
In conclusion, there are a lot of actions we can take to protect the
environment. We have to be conscious of that and behave in a responsible way.

[kwiatek_leona]

Tak na kolanie - zaznaczylam w nawiasach kilka sugestii, jak mozna by rzecz
inaczej ujac.

By the way, aluminium cans are 100% recyclable :)))



What steps can ordinary people take to help protect the environment?

Some people believe that ordinary people can do nothing (moze lepiej: can not
do anything...) really important to protect the environment. In my opinion it
definitely is not true (albo: this is not the case). Not only governments and
ecological organisations, but each person(but all people) all
over the world are responsible for the environment and can (help) protect it.
In my view the most important (aspect?) is to be conscious of that. People
should understand that every day (everyday) habits influence the state of
nature.
Our small steps are meaningful.
If we thought about that, we would choose the products or actions
more friendly for (to?) our environment. For instance, doing shopping we would
rather use sacks and bottles of many times (we would use reusable sacks and
recyclable bottles rather...)than disposable plastic sacks or
cans. We would also prefer public transport(ation?) than (to) our own car in
order to pollute less. Another action necessary to take is selection of rubbish
in this way that the most of them could be recycled. (is recovery of recycable
products during waste sorting)
In conclusion, there are a lot of actions we can take to protect the
environment. We have to be conscious of that and behave in a responsible way.

[paper_mate]

organisations => organizations

habits influence the state of nature = habits affect the environment

reusable sacks and recyclable bottles => reusable shopping bags and containers

our own car => private cars

selection of rubbish in this way that the most of them could be recycled =>
sorting household trash for recycling

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OK, I would suggest now to rewrite it and take a closer look at tenses.

[kwiatek_leona]

organisations => organizations

Mate, I think the "s" vs "z" thingy is a part of the English-English vs
American-English debacle...

[mizzmarymary]

Hi,
I've made some significant changes to yourwriting not only in terms of grammar, but also the flow and
word order of your writing. Very good though!

Yes, organisation is the British spelling whereas organization is the American. Rubbish is also more
common in the UK wheras Americans will use "garbage. Your audience will dictate your words choices
and spelling.
:))


What steps can ordinary people take to help protect the environment?

Some people believe that ordinary people CAN?T REALLY DO ANYTHING
important to protect the environment. In my opinion, THIS IS definitely not
true. Not only governments and ecological organisations, but each person IN the world IS responsible
for the environment and can protect it.
In my view the most important THING is to be conscious(AWARE) of that. People should understand that
every day habits influence the state of the nature. Our small steps are meaningful. If we thought about
IT, we would choose the products or actions THAT ARE MOST friendly TO our environment. For
instance, WHEN WE GO shopping we COULD use sacks and bottles many times INSTEAD OF disposable
plastic sacks or cans. We COULD CHOOSE public transportATION OVER our own carS in order to pollute
less. Another necessary ACTION to take WOULD BE TO SEPARATE OUR rubbish. In this way, most of IT
could be recycled.

In conclusion, there are a lot of actions we cOULD take to protect the environment. We have to be
conscientious and behave in a responsible way.

Bardzo dziękuję

[leopoldyna]

BARDZO DZIĘKUJĘ za wszystkie poprawki i uwagi !
Rowniez za informacje na temat utylizowania aluminiowych puszek. Teraz bede z
czystym sercem kupowala mezowi piwo w puszkach:)