Coverrting letter -please check me this

23.05.08, 22:20
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Dear ……

I would like to apply for the position of ...........

I've completed higher master education studies in Poland and I have
Master degree in the field of didactic-caring pedagogy and I also
have Postgraduate Certificate in the field of Specialist Pedagogy-
Oligophrenopedagogy.
I also have Act of Conferment of professional Teacher Degree. I've
passed the exam before Examination Committee appointed by the
Management Board of District Authority in ..... and I hereby awarded
Degree of the Certified Teacher.

I've experience in teaching, upbringing, didactic and caring
children and young people.
I've worked with children and young people with emotional and
behavioural difficulties, with disabilities, severe, moderate,
profound and multiple learning or physical difficulties; I also have
worked with autistic pupils. I’ve helped pupils attain their goals
and I’ve worked towards their individual education plans. Always,
I’ve remembered that much depend on the severity of the particular
special needs of the pupil. My work has been depending on the age of
the pupils and their individual needs.
I'm enthusiastic person and I have experience in working with
others. I've supported and assisted them with all aspects of their
daily living tasks and promoted independence and respect. I’ve
helped them increase their confidence and self esteem. I’ve assisted
pupils with physical needs with appropriate therapy sessions. I’ve
supported pupils in social activities and on outings. I have
experience in work in school with group of pupils and also with an
individual pupil or small group of pupils.
I also have worked with children who couldn’t live with their
parents. These children have needed to move into residential homes.
I’ve built relationships with younger children, supported them as
they develop, helped build self-image, develop practical skills,
helped in school and also built trust with the adult world.
I have inter-personal skills and I am well organised and creative.
I'm able to work as part of team, learn through training, to
understand the policies and procedure of the Department.
I have good health and an ability to undertake the duties of the
post.

I have attached my CV for your consideration, and look forward to
hearing from you.




Yours sincerely,



    • jonathan.oakley Re: Coverrting letter -please check me this 24.05.08, 22:00
      You mean, 'Can you check this for me please?'

      It reads well though I wouldn't use 'I' so many times to start a
      sentence: Changes in [ ]Good luck!

      Dear ……

      I [I am writing]to apply for the position of ...........

      [I have] completed higher master education studies in Poland and I
      have
      [a]Masters Degree in the field of didactic-caring pedagogy and I
      also
      have [a]Postgraduate Certificate in the field of Specialist Pedagogy-
      Oligophrenopedagogy.
      I also have [an]Act of Conferment of [P]rofessional Teacher[s]
      Degree. [I have also]
      passed [the]Examination Committee [exam under the authority of the]
      Management Board of District in ..... [leading to my Degree as a
      Certified Teacher]

      [I have] experience in teaching, upbringing, didactic and caring
      children and young people.
      [I have] worked with children and young people with emotional and
      behavioural difficulties, with disabilities, severe, moderate,
      profound and multiple learning or physical difficulties; I also have
      worked with autistic pupils. [I have] helped pupils attain their
      goals
      and [I have] worked towards their individual education plans.
      Always,
      [I have] remembered that much depend[s] on the severity of the
      special needs of the pupil. [The scope of my] work [depends] on the
      age of
      the pupils and their individual needs.
      [I am an] enthusiastic person and I have experience in working with
      others. [I have] supported and assisted [my pupils] with all aspects
      of their
      daily living tasks and promoted independence and respect. [I have]
      helped them increase their confidence and self esteem. [I have]
      assisted
      pupils with physical needs with appropriate therapy sessions. [I
      have]
      supported pupils in social activities and on outings. I have
      experience in work in school with group[s] of pupils and also with
      individual pupil[s] or small group[s] of pupils.
      I [have also] worked with children who [could not] live with their
      parents. These children have needed to move into residential homes.
      [I have] built relationships with younger children, supported them
      as
      they develop, helped build self-image, develop practical skills,
      helped in school and also built trust with the adult world.
      I have inter-personal skills and I am well organised and creative.
      [I am] able to work as part of [a]team, learn through training,
      [and]
      understand [and implement] the policies and proceedures of the
      Department.
      I have good health and an ability to undertake the duties of the
      post.

      I have attached my CV for your consideration, and look forward to
      hearing from you.
      • szajnerka Re: Coverrting letter -please check me this 24.05.08, 23:13
        Thanks a lot:-)
        I try to change this
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