Present Simple

[Gość: Mlodziak]

Zaczalem uczyc sie angielskiego w tym roku. Wczesniej niby mailaem z nim
kontakt, ale jednak... Trafilem do grupy z zaawansowanym ang. Musze napisac
to na jutro w czasie Presen Simple. Czy mógłby to ktoś sprawdzic i poprawic
moje bledy??

Jenice is alone in the house, she's waiting for her husband. She watches TV,
when the doorbell ring. Janice seeas a young woman standing at the door.
Woman said: "Would it be all right if I used your phone to call a taxi?"
Janice goes to the telephone and askes the local taxi service to ollect the
young woman. When she cames back, there was anybody, but the woman's flowers
was lying on the doormat. When James came back, she was still sitting on the
stairs with the flowers on her lap. He goes into the room, and turnes on the
light. James lookes araund and he sees his grandparents' clock. It ticking
loudly and it showdes the correct time. Then James notices an old photograph
next to the clock. James showes Jabnice photograph. It was picture of a
couple on their wedding day. (nie wiedziałem jak to napisać: James
powiedział, że jego matka umarła przed tym jak on poznał Janice)James saides
that women who sees Janice it was his grandma, and today is't her wedding
anniversary.

[Gość: Młodziak!!]

Proszę..........

[Gość: Dodo the Bird]

Poprawiłam kilka błędów:

Janice is alone in the house, she's waiting for her husband. She watches TV,
when the doorbell rings. Janice sees a young woman standing at the door. The
woman says: "Would it be all right if I used your phone to call a taxi?" Janice
goes to the telephone and asks the local taxi service to collect the young
woman. When she comes back, nobody's there, but the woman's flowers are lying
on the doormat. When James comes back, she is still sitting on the stairs with
the flowers in her lap. He goes into the room, and turns on the light. James
looks around and sees his grandparents' clock. It's ticking loudly and it shows
the correct time. Then James notices an old photograph next to the clock. James
shows Janice the photograph. It is the picture of a couple on their wedding
day. James says that the woman that Janice saw was his grandma, and that today
it is her wedding anniversary.

[tynski]

Janice is alone in the house, waiting for her husband. She is watching TV
when the doorbell rings. Janice sees a young woman standing at the door.
The woman says, "Would it be all right if I used your phone to call a taxi?"
Janice goes to the telephone and asks the local taxi service to collect the
young woman. When she comes back, there is nobody at the door; instead, a
bouquet of flowers is lying on the doormat.
When James comes back, she is still sitting on the stairs with the flowers on
her lap. James goes into the room and turns on the light. He looks around and
sees his grandparents' clock. It ticks loudly (as usual) and shows the correct
time. Then James notices an old photograph next to the clock. He shows it to
her

[Gość: Mlodziak]

DZIĘKI!!!!!! :) :) :) :)