wypracowanko, proofreading

[kurdelebele]

czy ktos zechce rzcic okiem na 'wypracowanie' czy wszystko trybi?


Dear XY,

XYZ.com is the first global network and a free-access way for international
students from all over Europe and elsewhere to connect and share their abroad
experience with other fellow students, including exchange coordinators from
respective institutions. Our innovative project is supported by the European
Union.

We bring for all the people engaged in international exchange programmes a new
place where they can get to know with each other and find any information they
are looking for. With all the required tools students are able to prepare
their trip thoroughly beforehand.

When signing in, every student is asked to indicate the name of its sending
and receiving institution, so as to be automatically recognized by his future
fellow students and to be able to find the information he needs in the most
effective way. Every user gets a personal account and has access to message
boards. Every bit of information about universities, courses, scholars, halls
of residence, public transport and entertainment - now all of that is
organized and just one click away.

(Additionnally, members of our website can easily book tickets online for
various means of transportation, find a flat to rent and look for flatmates or
roommates, open a bank account and deal with all the sometimes mundane, but
essential tasks to ensure the success of the residence abroad.)

Our goal is also to cooperate with you as the coordinator of international
exchange programme at the University of XYZ. We offer you an account with no
fees whatsoever that provides you with communication facilities with incoming
and outgoing students as well as with coordinators from other educational
institutions. Send announcements to your students, publish downloadable files
for them, follow their ups and downs and more!

Please take a brief moment and respond to the following questions:

1. As a coordinator of international exchange programmes, what main
difficulties or challenges have you been facing? If possible, we would like to
help and hopefully resolve the situation for you.

2. Is there any other suggestion you would like to make regarding our possible
cooperation?

Let us stress once again that becoming member of our website is completely
free of charge for unlimited period.

We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

sprobuje

[karul]

para 1 - free-access method, share their experience, with other
students

para 2 - for all people engaged in ... we bring, get to know each
other

para 3 - the information he/she needs, public
transportation, "faculty" instead of "scholars"

para 4 - additionally

para 5 - you can send announcements

[mudzyn7]

Fortunately it's not for me, cause it's totally useless anyway.

[kurdelebele]

ey buddy, a penny for your thoughts ! (I guess it's not worth any more than
that, anyway.)