Can you help, please?

[Gość: mariola]

I must write a letter to college in support of my application - I am
not sure if what I wrote is in correct English. Would you, in
confidence, check this for me, please? Any address I can send the
text? Thanks for reply!

[Gość: gosc zyczliwy]

Mariolu
ja przeczytalem twoja prosbe i tam jest wiele bledow , piszac w j.
angielski nie mozemy myslec po polsku i tlumaczy, w j. angelskim s
inne struktury zdania.
I need to write a cover letter to support my application. I am not
sure if I used correct English. Would you be so kind to review my
cover letter and application.If so, please advise regarding your
email address.
Thank you for your help.
Regards,
Mariola

Sens jest taki sam ale troche inny English

[la_dolce_vita]

zyczliwy gosc - given, that Mariola (judging by her IP) lives in Poland, she has made a very good attempt. Had she been sure of her abilities, she wouldn't be asking for help, would she?

Come on, give her a break!

[jonathan.oakley]

Yes, I would be delighted to help...I've just got back from Milan so
i'm a bit behind with a few things so it may take me a few days to
respond, but you can send me a mail in confidence to:
[e-mail] and I will do my best to assist. :)

[Gość: Mariola]

Oh, thank you! Very kind of you – but, I'm afraid, I have sent it
already. Let's keep our fingers crossed:)

[jonathan.oakley]

I'm sure everything will be fine. :)