POMOCY!!!!

[funky_girl_18]

Na tym forum jest napewno wiele osob, ktore świetnie mowia po angielsku wiec
jakby ktos mial chwilke czasu to pliss sprawdz czy moje podanie o prace jest
dobrze napisane!!!!! pozdro

Dear Mr Constantine,

I am writing in response to your email concerning opportunities of working
in your restaurant and I would like to apply for a position of
a waitress. I enclose a copy of my C.V.
I am a student of secondary school in Kutno. My reasons applying for
this job is that I hope to go to university next year and
I would like to combine working at weekends with studying
I am a outgoing, sociable and friendly person and I like meeting new
people. I also know how to quickly link with other person.
I think I would be a good worker, because I have gained some work
experience during last holidays, both as a waitress. I also speak English and
Russian fluently.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

[ms.jones]

Ja sie na tym nie znam ale jesli jest zle to na pewno ktos poprawi :)

> Dear Mr Constantine,
>
> I am writing in response to your email concerning opportunities of working
> in your restaurant and I would like to apply for the position of
> a waitress. I enclose a copy of my C.V.
> I am a student AT A secondary school in Kutno. My reasoN FOR applying for
> this job is that I hope to go to university next year and
> I would like to combine working at weekends with studying. (odwrotnie?)
I am aN outgoing, sociable and friendly person and I enjoy meeting (new)people.
(I think I would be a good worker, because - nie myslisz ze bedziesz tylko
wiesz ze bedziesz :)I gained some work experience as a waitress (gdzie? jak
dlugo?)during my summer holidays last year. I am very confident in new
situations and in dealing with customers. I am a punctual and an enthusiastic
worker, able to pick up new skills with ease. I also speak English and Russian
fluently.

> (Thank you for considering my application. )I look forward to hearing from
you soon.

> Yours sincerely,

[lynnl]

fluent English ,jasne!

[axxolotl]

Is that supposed to be constructive criticism?

[funky_girl_18]

Biorac pod uwage ze mam 5 z angola (a w mojej grupie sa tylko dwie 5) i ze
zdarzylam napisac swoje wypracowanie a 3 innym osobom poprawic to nie jest tak
zle:D a pewno ty bys nawet tak nie napisala i zazdroscisz!!!! hehehehhe
pozdro4u

[axxolotl]

> I am a student of secondary school in Kutno
I am a student at a secondary school in Kutno

>My reasons applying for this job is that I hope to go to university next year
>and I would like to combine working at weekends with studying

My reasons for applying for this job is that I hope to go to university next
year and I would like to combine studying and working on weekends.

>I also know how to quickly link with other person.
to link za bardzo tu nie pasuje. You probably mean "establish rapport", ale to
tez za bardzo mi tu nie pasuje.
Mozesz napisac "I get along with other people well.

[jan.kulczyk]

Or I can relate to other people easily.

[funky_girl_18]

Wielkie DZIEKI za pomoc!!!!!!! Jak moja nauczycielka odda mi wypracwanie to
napisze co dostalam:)

pozdrowionka:)

[minimus]

> Jak moja nauczycielka odda mi wypracwanie to
> napisze co dostalam:)

chyba co dostałaś ty oraz janek, axxoltl, i ms jones

BTW, wiesz jak się nazywa ściąganie po angielsku? CHEATING

[jan.kulczyk]

Ależ nie, to się nazywa
free tutoring provided by the good people from the English only board.

Ma to nawet chyba swoją kategorię EKD

;))

[minimus]

tiaa..., a później trza czytać takie wątki o "anglistach od 7 boleści" (widać
ktoś za nich lekcje odrabiał).

Ble

[jan.kulczyk]

Ale takie wątki o pseudoanglistach się miło czyta. Można się dowartościować i zabić nudę w deszczowe popołudnie.

[minimus]

no tak, ale teraz nie pada, poza tym, przynajmniej ja, nie jestem anglistą

[funky_girl_18]

Dobra nie chcialam wprowadzac zwalowej atmosfery ale... jak dostalam odp na moj
post to niestey wypracowanie zdarzylam juz oddac nauczycielce :((( Niezla shiza
z tego wyszla ale nie chcialam robic zamiesaznia. heheh

A tak pozatym to b. ladnie komus pomagac jesli sie wiecej umie... (TO
WYPRACOWANIE to bylo na odwal sie i daletego poprosilam o pomoc) ja czesto
pomagam innnym nie tylko w angolu nawet jutro bede pomagac w pisaniu
wypracowania wiec......

...TO NIE WSTYD POMAGAC INNYM RACZEJ BARDZO POZYTYWA RZECZA JEST DZIELIC SIE
SWOIMI UMIEJETNOSCIAMI A JAK KTOS TEGO NIE ROZUMIE TO TRUDNO....

serdecznie pozdrowionka dla wszystkich "HELPEROW" oby takich ludzi jak
najwiecej!!!!!!!

P.S. I tak napisze co dostalam:)

[minimus]

You obviously don't get it. I will try to explain in English, perhaps you will
read more carefully.
Helping is not bad. CHEATING is bad. You cheated people here, on this forum,
leading them to believe that you really are looking for a job. In reality you
just wanted others to do your job. You also intended to CHEAT your teacher,
saying that you wrote it yourself. You also are CHEATING your class mates
because you are probably going to get a better grade than you diserve (but
that's ok as they probably do the same).

So in this wonderful country of ours we have people (with funky girl 18 being a
prime example) who don't understand that CHEATING is a bad thing. They start
CHEATING at school, and do it later on in their life. AND THEY DON'T EVEN
FVCKING UNDERSTAND THAT THIS IS A BAD THING TO DO! We may be in the EU, but
this is really a Dritte Welt!

FVCK FVCK FVCK FVCK

And on this note I shall retire.

Good night.

[funky_girl_18]

heh mam nieodparte wrazenie ze nie umiesz czytac po polsku;) Czy naprawde
uwazasz, ze poproszenie kogos o SPRAWDZENIE BLEDOW to to samo co sciaganie??!!!
NIKT TU ZA MNIE WYPRACOWANIA NIE NAPISAL!!!! Poprostu kilka milych osob
sprawdzilo mi bledy!!!! A poza tym i tak nie dopisalam tych kilu wyrazow bo juz
bylo za pozno!! a i gdzie tu jest napisane ze ja naprawde szukam pracy przeciez
na pierwszy rzut oka widac ze to zmyslone dane np. dr mr Constantine (to z
filmu).
Przykre jest to ze zle mnie oceniles zgadzam sie z toba ze sciaganie jest zle ,
ja nie sciagam bo po pierwsze nie mam z kogo, bo z wiekszosci przedmiotow
jestem b.dobra a po drugie to jak juz cos to inni ze mnie sciagaja !!!

P.S.Ale i tak czy siak zawsze pomagalam innym i bede to robic bo uwazam, ze to
nie moja zasluga, że np z matmy sie nie ucze i dostaje 5 a inni sie mecza i
same 1 maja!!! Pewnie Ty nie pomoglbys im tylko powiedzial zeby sie sami
nauczyli.......

P.S. A wogole to naprawde wqrwia mnie takie podejscie ja potrafie wiele czasu
poswicic na pomaganie innym czasem naprwde nie mam juz sily i musze odmawiac a
jak raz potrzebowalam pomocy to ci potem taki minimus napisze ze "They start
CHEATING at school, and do it later on in their life"
grwa ludzie pomyslcie troche potem piszcie!!!!!!!

[jan.kulczyk]

hey minimus chill.... wouldn't it have been as bad or even worse if she had used YOUR help to get herself through the job recruitment process? indeed, the employer might misjudge her actual qualifications and hire her based on assistance YOU provided her with on this message board. don't you think that would have been shameless? ;))

anyway... no wrong in helping people I suppose, no wrong in using help either.
just my two cents..

[funky_girl_18]

buhahahah nauczcie sie ludzie czytac , bo napisalam wczesniej "ak dostalam odp
na moj post to niestey wypracowanie zdarzylam juz oddac nauczycielce :((( "

pozdro:D