CzY To ZdAnIe JeSt PoPrAwNe???????

[funky_girl_18]

Finally the price was too high in proportion of really low standard your
holiday.

??????
:))

[kylie1]

No, it's not correct.

Try "Finally the price was too high in proportion to your low standard
holidays".

:)

[funky_girl_18]

WIELKIE DZIEKI!!!! :))

a to zdanie bo cos mi tu nie pasuje: As if this were not enough there was no
guide as promised in the brochure so we had to organize all tours by ourselves.

[ms.jones]

as if it/this/that was not enough ...
organise - brytyjska pisownia
organize - amerykanska pisownia

[jan.kulczyk]

Were jest poprawne.
To forma trybu warunkowego, tworzona na takiej samej zasadzie jak:

"If I were to buy this car, I would need a shitload of cash"... oops sorry maggie, I'll rephrase it: "a pooload of cash". ;)))

[jan.kulczyk]

Poza tym trochę nielogicznie skonstruowane. Można się domyślić, o co chodzi, ale można także wywnioskować, że przewodnika nie było właśnie zgodnie z wcześniejszymi ustaleniami <lol>

Może: "contrary to what the brochure said, there was no guide" or sth along those lines.

[funky_girl_18]

O kurcze teraz to niezly strach mnie oblecial, bo ja to wypracowanie nie dla
siebie pisalam i lipa by byla jakby sie okazalo z bledami:(((((

To ja zamieszczam caly tekst jakby ktos jakies bledy zobaczyl to prosze niech
napisze!!! DZIEKI ZA POMOC:)

Dear Mr. Gray,

After successfully using your agency for many years, I recently
experienced a terrible problem. I am writing to express my strong
dissatisfaction with 'A Taste of Barcelona' holiday which I took part from 1 -
14 July.
I took the holiday with my wife to celebrate our 5th wedding
anniversary. My wife was so looking forward to it, but unfortunately the trip
was not as relaxing and pleasant as advertised in your brochure.
First of all the Siesta Hotel was not up to five-star standard. We were
woken up by the sound of drilling and hammering because the hotel was opposite
a building site. In addition our rooms were dirty – what is not acceptable. As
if this were not enough there was no guide as promised in the brochure so we
had to organize all tours by ourselves. To make matters worse on with 'A Taste
of Barcelona' holiday in fact weren’t any attractions. According to your
leaflet, there were supposed be a lot of cinemas, pubs and discos, but there
was nothing. Finally the price was too high in proportion to your low standard
holidays.
You can image how disappointed I am. I expect a full refund of my money
as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely
XYZ
P.S. TO wypracowanie to zmyslone zeby ktos nie pomyslal ze mam zone;)

how about this then?

[ms.jones]

Joe Wong
57 Kowhai Ave
Hamilton
13th July 2002

Trek and Trail Ltd.
2/145 Forster St
Hamilton

Dear Mr. Tindall

I am writing to inform you of the unhappy experience I had when I took part in
your 'A Taste of Barcelona' holiday from 3 - 11 July.
I took the holiday with my wife to celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary. My
wife was so looking forward to it, but unfortunately she spent most of the
holiday in tears.

My complaints fall into three main areas: the accommodation, the food and the
transport. Firstly, the Siesta Hotel was not up to five-star standard. We had
no balcony or sea view, as promised in the brochure. Also, we were woken up by
the sound of drilling and hammering because the hotel was opposite a building
site. There was no choice on the menu in the hotel and the food was mediocre.
Finally, the transport was unreliable throughout the holiday, from our arrival
(the limousine never arrived!) to our departure (the flight was delayed by two
hours). As result of these problems we have suffered a great deal of stress.

I would like you to send me a full refund for the holiday. I have enjoyed
dealing with your company in the past because of the helpful service and look
forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely


J.W.T. Wong
Joe Wong

english.unitecnology.ac.nz/resources/units/10792/model_letter2.html

oh, well

[ms.jones]

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with 'A Taste of Barcelona'
holiday which I WENT ON from 1 - 14 July.

After successfully using your agency for many years (Having enjoyed the
services of your agency for many years), I recently experienced a terrible
problem. I took the holiday with my wife to celebrate our 5th wedding
> anniversary. My wife was so looking forward to it, but unfortunately the trip
> was not as relaxing and pleasant as advertised in your brochure.

> First of all, the Siesta Hotel was not up to (the promised) five-star
> standard. We were woken up by the sound of drilling and hammering because the
hotel was opposite a building site. In addition, our rooms were dirty WHICH is
not acceptable.

As if this were(/was) not enough there was no guide (we had been) promised in
the brochure so we had to organize all tours by ourselves. To make matters
worse/In fact, on 'A Taste of Barcelona' holiday THERE WERE NO attractions AT
ALL. According to your leaflet there were supposed be (group) OUTINGS TO THE
cinema, pubs and discos, but there was nothing.

Finally, considering THE low standard THE holiday, the price was (far)too high.

You can image how disappointed I am. I expect a full refund of my money as soon
as possible.
>
> Yours sincerely

[ms.jones]

wyrzuc recently bo data wakacji jest podana
my wife was *greatly* looking forward...zamiast 'so'

[funky_girl_18]

THANK YOU! DANKE! DZIEKI! ;) JESTES SUPER:) POZDROWIONKA:)

[ampolion]

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