proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka :)

[matka_chrzestna]

Witam
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej rozprawce
na temat zalet i wad robienia zakupów w hipermarketach

z góry ślicznie dziękuje
pozdrawiam

Nowadays, walkabouts in hypermarkets are getting a form of spending free
time. Instead, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to
supermarkets. Although, doing a shopping in this places has a lot of
advantages there are also disadvantages.

There is no denying that in hypermarkets you can find everything you want –
clothes, food, household equipment, and other things. So, when you are very
busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if
you like read labels and consider which product is more worthwhile to buy you
can do it much easier in hypermarkets. What is more, people have bigger
opportunity to find cheep original things because there are a lot of
reductions and sellouts.

On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can
buy things, which you don’t need and, don’t want to but you buy it under the
influence of the moment. Another problem is noise. Hypermarkets often are
crowded and loud places. As a result, when some people have to stay in long
queues or look for a parking place it makes them very stressed and annoyed,.
Furthermore in small shops you can talk to shop assistant, he may give you
advices about some products and share his experience with you. In
supermarkets you don’t have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets will always have advantages
and disadvantages. It seems that decision what that means for different
people depends on personal point of view and style of life. If you want to
you can go there it is your own choice.

dzięki
pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna

[asha9211]

my god .. rozprawski are getting longer and longer

Nowadays, walkabouts (I AM SORRY I DO NOT KNOW WHAT IT IS) AT hypermarkets
are getting a form of spending free time. Instead OF going to the park, cinema
or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing shopping AT THOSE
places has a lot of advantages AS WELL AS disadvantages.

There is no denying that AT hypermarkets you can find everything you want –
clothes, food, household equipment, and other things. So, when you are very
busy, visiting this kind of STORE may save your precious time. In addition, if
you like TO read labels and consider which product is more worthwhile (would
not use worthwhile – maybe USEFUL?) to buy you can do it much easier AT THE
hypermarkets. What is more (BESIDES) , people have bigger (I would use MORE)
opportunity to find cheep original things (GOODS OR MERCHANDISE) because there
are a lot of reductions and sellouts (SALES)

On the other hand, there are (IS) a number of disadvantages. For instance, you
can buy things, which you don’t need and,(OR) don’t want SINCE you buy it
under the influence of the moment. Another problem is noise. Hypermarkets often
are crowded and loud places. As a result, when some people have to stay in long
queues (LINES) or look for a parking place it makes them very stressed and
annoyed. Furthermore in small shops you can talk to shop assistant, he may give
you AN advice (NO S) about products and share his experience with you. In
supermarkets you don’t have this possibility. (OR OPTION ...chociaz w zyciu
codziennym, mozesz kogos z obslugi dorwac I zadac pytanie – prawdopodobnie nie
beda wiedzieli ale .. )

In conclusion, doing shopping AT hypermarkets will always have advantages and
disadvantages. It seems that decision (OF SHOPPING AT SMALL STORES VERSUS
HYPERMARKETS) depends on INDIVIDUAL point of view and style of life. If you
want you can go there. It is your own choice.

[papperlapapp]

Nowadays, shopping spree in hypermarkets is getting a form of spending free
time. Instead of going to the park, cinema or theatre families tend to go to
supermarkets. Although doing a shopping in these/such places has a lot of
advantages, there are also disadvantages.

Doubtlessly, in hypermarkets you can find everything you want –
clothes, food, household equipment, and other things. So, when you are very
busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if
you like reading labels and considering which product is more worthwhile to buy, you
can do it much easier in hypermarkets. What is more, people have bigger
opportunity to find cheep original things because there are a lot of
reductions and sellouts.

On the other hand, there is a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can
buy things, which you don’t need and which are unnecessary but you buy it under the
influence of the moment. Another problem is noise. Hypermarkets often are
overcrowded and loud places. As a result, when some people have to stay in long
queues or look for a parking place it makes them very stressed and annoyed,.
Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to shop assistant, he may give you some
advice about some products and share his experience with you. In
supermarkets you don’t have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets will always have advantages
and disadvantages. It seems that decision what that means for different
people depends on personal point of view and style of life (tu cos sie nie
zgadza). If you want to
you can go there - it is your own choice.

In general - good work!

[la_dolce_vita]

My God, you are prolific:-))


Nowadays, WANDERING AROUND THE hypermarkets IS BECOMING a WAY of spending free
> time. Instead OF going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to
> supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in SUCH places has a lot of
> advantages there are also disadvantages.
>
> IT MUST BE SAID that in hypermarkets you can find everything you want AND
NEED:
> clothes, food, household ITEMS, SPORTS equipment, and other GOODS. THEREFORE
FOR A BUSY PERSON visiting this TYPE of shop may save your precious time. In
addition, if
> you like TO read labels and consider which product is more worthwhile (TU NIE
BARDZO WIADOMO O CO CHODZI) to buy you
> can do it WITH MORE EASE in hypermarkets. What'S more, THERE IS A GREATER
CHANCE OF FINDING cheAp original BRAND ITEMS because there are a lot of
> reductions and sALES.
>
> On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you ARE
TEMPTED TO
> buy things which you don’t need and YOU DID NOT INTEND TO BUY, BUT YOU DO ON
THE SPUR of the moment. Another problem is THE noise. OFTEN, Hypermarkets are
> crowded. IN CONSEQUENCE, when people have to QUEUE FOR A LONG TIME or look
for a parking SPACE it makes them very stressed and annoyed.
> ON THE OTHER HAND in small shops you can talk to THE shop assistant, he may
give you
> ADVICE about CERTAIN/SPECIFIC products and share his experience with you. In
> supermarkets THIS IS MORE DIFFICULT, AS THE SERVICE IS LESS PERSONAL.
>
> In conclusion, shopping in hypermarkets HAS MANY PROS AND CONS. It WOULD
APPEAR that FOR different
> people THE DECISION depends on personal VIEWPOINT, PREFERENCES and
LIFESTYLE. IF YOU WISH TO SHOP IN HYPERMARKETS, YOU CAN DO SO - THE CHOICE IS
YOURS.
>

[la_dolce_vita]

gee-whizz, this is becoming a race for time!!

[asha9211]

la_dolce_vita napisała:
> gee-whizz, this is becoming a race for time!!
you are right ... soon they will fire me at work since i am not doing anything
except snooping on the internet and cking forum... ha ha ha

[la_dolce_vita]

just tell your boss you do it pro publico bono

troszkę zmieniłam

[matka_chrzestna]

troszkę zmieniłam
na pewno są jeszze jakieś błedy, ale jest lepiej niż na początku... prawda?

Nowadays, wandering around the hypermarkets is becoming a way of spending free
time. Instead of, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to
supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in these places has a lot of advantages
there are also disadvantages.

Doubtlessly in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food,
household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this
kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading
labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much
easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunity to find cheap
original things because there are a lot of reductions and sales.

On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can
buy things, which you do not need and do not want to but you buy them under the
influence of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Often, Hypermarkets are
crowded and loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome
or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed,
Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to a shop assistant, he may give you
advice about specific products and share his experience with you. In
supermarkets you do not have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems
that the decision what that means to different people depends on personal point
of view and lifestyle. The choice of whether you do your shopping in
hypermarkets always remains with you

[kicior99]

>can buy things, which you do not need

przecinek

>As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome
> or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed,

To jest polski szyk, nie uwazasz?

szyk

[matka_chrzestna]

specjalistkę w szykach nie jestem, ale skoro uważasz, że źle to pewnie masz
rację... ;)


"As a result, when people have to queue for a long time or look for a parking
space it makes them very stressed and annoyed, "
maybe:
It makes people very stressed and annoyed, when they have to queue for a long
time or look for a parking space