błędy:(

[adyta1]

Bardzo bym prosiła o poprawienie błędów w tej pracy:(


True and myths about Poles…

On the world you can hear mane views and stereotypes about people from
Poland.. Personally I believe that majority isn’t true.

In the first place is on the west myth about polish alcoholics. They thing
that we are always drunk, that we do all under the influence, drink driving a car…

As a matter of fact a lot are myth about workaholics. People who believe that
this is true having right.-we are very diligence nation. For example: ask
brutish employer about polish worker…. But only (99%) from border us country.
We are doers. Poles must do something, we can’t sit and nothing to do…

Isn’t true that we are thief. Polish nation is very honestly, unless there
isn’t another out. However them we can to bend law. In my opinion we suppose
so have a right to do that.

Finally, we are pill taker. We are taking medicine always when we don’t fell
good. Poles aren’t resistant on pain, especially headache. We take thousands
drag on year. Poland is champion in this discipline in Europe, maybe on the
world or in num galaxies… If you wont be bather you are crazy, or idiot..

If you look on us you can sea that we aren’t a good night's sleep. Sometimes I
don’t know when people from Poland sleep. But in fact somebody sleep twelve to
thirteen hours. day and night. Also my friends can sleep all day and night,
round the clock. My believe is that this is horrible disease.

From my points of view we have low salary, we haven’t pickings- orders, and
any money motivated. Us job is have high stress levels, we stuck in run. We
have dead-end jobs. I believe that this is sick….

In conclusion: we are honestly, workaholics and good worker, also pill taker
too. Al to all we aren’t alcoholics, but doer.

[adyta1]

Bardzo bym prosiła o pomoc to naprawde dla mnie wazne

[adyta1]

[hayden]

Witaj,

Właśnie przeczytałem Twój post. Wszystkie zmiany zaznaczam dużymi literami.
Przy kolejnym zadaniu pamiętaj, że:
- esej/artykuł to tekst przynajmniej w miare formalny i nie stosuje się tam form skróconych,
- kiedy napiszesz jakieś zdanie/akapit dobrze jest je przeczytać i zastanowić się czy sama rozumiesz angielską wersję swojej polskiej myśli,
- a także, czy nie ma błędów zmieniających znaczenie (np. brutish - ieco brutalny zamiast British).

Pozdrawiam,

hayden


TruTHS and myths about Poles…

IN the world, you can hear manY views and ENCOUNTER MANY stereotypes about people from Poland. Personally, I believe that majority OF THEM isn’t true.

In the first place, IT is A myth THAT POLES ARE alcoholics. SOME PEOPLE IN THE WEST thinK that we are always drunk, EVEN WHEN WE ARE DRIVING A CAR.

IN a matter of fact, ANOTHER BELIEF THAT WE ARE workaholics, IS NOT SO DISTANT FROM THE TRUTH. This is true THAT We are A very diligence nation. JUST ask A BrItish employer about A Polish worker. HOWEVER, THIS IS ONLE TRUTH IN CASE OF THE PEOPLE FROM THE AREAS NEAR THE border OF OUR country. THEY ARE BORN
MEN OF ACTION WHO must do something AND CANNOT sit and DO nothing.
IT IS NOT true, EITHER,that we are thiefS. QUITE THE OPPOSITE IN FACT, PolES ARE very honest, unless therE IS NO OTHER CHOICE WHATSOEVER. However, WE MAY INTERPRET THE LAW IN THE WAY THAT WE FIND CONVENIENT. In my opinion, we suppOSE
ose THAT WE have a right to do that.
Finally, we are ADDICTED TO MEDICINES. We takE PILLS ANYTIME we DO NOT FEEL
good. Poles are VULNERABLE TO pain, especially A headache, AND We take thESE
MEDICINES SO OFTEN THAT Poland is A EUROPEAN champion in this FIELD (IF NOT GLOBAL OR GALAXY CHAMPION).
If you look on us, you can seE that we DO NOT CARE MUCH ABOUT HOW OFTEN AND LONG WE sleep. Sometimes I DO NOT UNDERSTAND when people from Poland sleep. But, in fact, some OF US sleep twelve to thirteen hours. FOR EXAMPLE, my friends can sleep all day and night, round the clock. My belieF is that this is SOME KIND OF SERIOUS MEDICAL CONDITION.
From my point of view, we have low salarIES AND MONEY DOES NOT motivate US. OUR jobS ARE stressFUL AND dead-end. I believe that this is sick.
In conclusion: we are honest AND EFFCIENT workaholics, aND pill-takerS,
too. AlL IN all, NOT alcoholics, but MEN OF ACTION.