dobrze?

[Gość: jha]

Czy to jest Ok? Czy ma sens tego w nawiasie?


Then I looked into the mirror, and I saw a old man. it was terrible. then, I
had woken up, and I was so happy because I had 17 years.

(Potem spojrzałem w lustro i ujrzałem w nim starego mężczyznę. To było
strasznę. Lecz chwilę potem obudziłem się i byłem bardzo szczęśliwy, że
miałem 17 lat)

[Gość: Geek]

Then I looked in the mirror, and I saw an old man. It was terrible. But a
moment later I woke up and was very happy to be 17 years old.

[Gość: ania]

Then I looked in the mirror, and I saw an old man in it. It was terrible. But
a
moment later I woke up and was very happy to be 17 years old.

This si the one!

[who.cares]

Gość portalu: Geek napisał(a):

> Then I looked in the mirror, and I saw an old man. It was terrible. But a
> moment later I woke up and was very happy to be 17 years old.

[Gość: H.]

- an old man
- I was 17 years old

[Gość: e tam dobrze]

I then looked up in the mirror and saw a terrible, old man glaring back at
me. Startled, I woke up and was happy to be 17 again.

[zegar4]

Gość portalu: e tam dobrze napisał(a):

> I then looked up in the mirror and saw a terrible, old man glaring back at
> me. Startled, I woke up and was happy to be 17 again.

Questionable then and no coordinate adjective coma after terrible, Mr.
Etamdobrze.

[Gość: H.]

Sounds good, but too elaborate for high school English.