check this sentence, please...

[jestem_73]

However, in my view, everyone, who is the brave, talented, ambitious young person, not especially strongly related with your loved ones and who can imagine Christmas without his parents and borscht with dumplings is capable of living very far away.

[karul.nowy]

jestem_73 napisała:

> However, in my view, everyone, who is the brave, talented, ambitious young p
> erson, not especially strongly related with your loved ones and who can imagine
> Christmas without his parents and borscht with dumplings is capable of living
> very far away.


Kilka zmian: a brave .... person, their loved ones, without their parents

[jestem_73]

dzięki, zdanie przerabiane dziesięć razy w końcu wymknęło mi się spod kontroli:)

[perk]

Family relations are close.
Family ties are strong.
Related to…
Not especially strongly related to one’s loved ones is a confused mess.
His is singular, their is plural. Don't let them bamboozle you into this singular their nonsense.

However, in my view, every brave, talented, and ambitious young person not especially strongly attached to his relatives and who can imagine Christmas without his parents and the Christmas dinner table without borscht with dumplings, is capable of living far away from home.

However, in my view... is more often than not redundant fluff.

[perk]

I missed the comma: ...relatives, and who...

[ampolion]

Czy jest tutaj jakis specjalista od angielskiej interpunkcji?