prosze o pomoc-bledy

[Gość: Ania]

Bardzo prosze o pomoc w sprawdzeniu ponizszych zdan.3 zdania sa dobre, jedno
zdanie moze zawierac tylko jeden blad:

1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
addiction affected many countries.

2. One can do well on this job if you budget your time.

3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.

4. The president, along with many senators, opposes the bill.

5. Diners had a choice of broccoli, green beans, peas and carrots.

6. One of the ballerinas lost her balance.

7. Drivers, who have been convicted of drunken driving, should lose their
licenses.

8. Once deregulated, a price hike ine the industry is expected.

9. This disease is unusual; its symptoms vary from oerosn to person. It's
difficult disease to diagnose.

Z gory dziekuje
Ania

[Gość: Ania]

oj chyba za pozno pytam

:-(
Ania

[bylla]

Gość portalu: Ania napisał(a):

> Bardzo prosze o pomoc w sprawdzeniu ponizszych zdan.3 zdania sa dobre, jedno
> zdanie moze zawierac tylko jeden blad:
>
> 1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
> addiction affected many countries.

powinno byc "few" bez "a"


> 2. One can do well on this job if you budget your time.
>
> 3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.
>
> 4. The president, along with many senators, opposes the bill.
>
> 5. Diners had a choice of broccoli, green beans, peas and carrots.
>
> 6. One of the ballerinas lost her balance.
>
> 7. Drivers, who have been convicted of drunken driving, should lose their
> licenses.
>
> 8. Once deregulated, a price hike ine the industry is expected.
>
> 9. This disease is unusual; its symptoms vary from oerosn to person. It's
> difficult disease to diagnose.

a difficult disease

[Gość: xman]

Nr 7 jest bez sensu. Wyrzucić przecinki.

[zegar4]

Gość portalu: Ania napisał(a):


> 1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
> addiction affected many countries.
...but the addiction affects/has affected (don't like your tense) many
countries.

> 2. One can do well on this job if you budget your time.
...if one budgets one's time.
You can do well on this job if you...



> 3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.
By the time Ian arrived, Jill had died.

> 4. The president, along with many senators, opposes the bill.
OK.

> 5. Diners had a choice of broccoli, green beans, peas and carrots.
OK.

> 6. One of the ballerinas lost her balance.
OK.

> 7. Drivers, who have been convicted of drunken driving, should lose their
> licenses.
No commas.

> 8. Once deregulated, a price hike ine the industry is expected.
You cannot deregulate a price hike.


> 9. This disease is unusual; its symptoms vary from oerosn to person. It's
> difficult disease to diagnose.
It's a difficult...

> Z gory dziekuje
> Ania

[cheesey]

zegar4 napisała:

> Gość portalu: Ania napisał(a):
>
> > 1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
> > addiction affected many countries.
moze byc affected - moze to bylo w przeszlosci


> > 3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.
> By the time Ian arrived, Jill had died.

niekoniecznie osoba mogla umrzec w chwili przyjscia Iana

[aniutka70]

Wszystkim dziekuje za pomoc, mam prawidlowe odp.:

> 1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
> addiction affected many countries.

zamiast affected - affects


> 2. One can do well on this job if you budget your time.

Zamiast one - she , he or a person



> 3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.

Jill had died

> 4. The president, along with many senators, opposes the bill.
OK

> 5. Diners had a choice of broccoli, green beans, peas and carrots.

przecinek po peas

> 6. One of the ballerinas lost her balance.
OK

> 7. Drivers, who have been convicted of drunken driving, should lose their
> licenses.

Zdanie powinno byc bez zadnych przecinkow

> 8. Once deregulated, a price hike ine the industry is expected.

Jeden ze sposobow poprawienia zdania:
Once industry is deregulated, a price hike is expected

> 9. This disease is unusual; its symptoms vary from oerosn to person. It's
> difficult disease to diagnose.
OK

Ania

[cheesey]

aniutka70 napisała:

> Wszystkim dziekuje za pomoc, mam prawidlowe odp.:
>
> > 1. A few countries produce almost all of the word's illegal drugs, but
> > addiction affected many countries.
>
> zamiast affected - affects
to co? czlowiek ma byc mind-reader? "affects" kompletnie zmienia sens zdania.
A moze chodzila ze w przeszlosci czyli "affected"

>
>
> > 2. One can do well on this job if you budget your time.
>
> Zamiast one - she , he or a person
Bzdura! Duzo lepiej jest "if one...
>
>
> > 3.By the time Ian arrived, Jill died.
>
> Jill had died - tylko gdy jill died BEFORE he arrived
Inaczej ma byc - died

>
> > 9. This disease is unusual; its symptoms vary from oerosn to person. It's
>
> > difficult disease to diagnose.
> OK
Bzdura - ma byc "a disease"


Jaki debil uczy Cie angielskiego???

[aniutka70]

cheesey napisała:

> Jaki debil uczy Cie angielskiego???

Dzieki za pomoc, ale bylabym bardziej ostrozna w formulowaniu opini. Nie wiem
moze znasz angielski doskonale (ja zupelnie srednio, moze nawet gorzej niz
srednio), ale tak sie sklada, ze jestem na collegu w stanach i tym debilem jest
moj profesor od angielskiego z ENG 101. wydaje mi sie ze jest najbardziej
kompetentna osoba na swoim stanowisku.

pzdr
Ania