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Pilnie prosze o pomoc

14.10.10, 13:00
Hej. Chciałabym prosić osoby dobre z j.ang. o pomoc, a mianowicie: poprawienie mojego wypracowania na j.ang. o najlepszej przyajciółce. Jestem dzisiaj jakaś taka otępiona, wogóle nie mam weny, dlataego przyda mi się wasza korekta. A wiec oto te wypracowanie:

My best friend called Natalia, she’s 14 years old and like black clothes and reggae music.
Natalia is medium size, shorter than me.
Why I like she? I think that because Natalia never isn’t a big-headed and I can’t bored with she. Sometimes she’s too much honest and we never can’t agree with chose music, but I really like spend time with she.
And what she look? Like I said, Natalia doesn’t is a very tall. She has got a long, straight, brown hair and dark eyes.
In closed future she want doing dreadlock.

Prosze, nie pomyśłcie sobie o mnie źle, tylko dzisiaj po prostu tak kiepsko mi się myśli, dlatego pewnie będzie tutaj z sto błędów i niedorzeczności, ale zwracam się do was, bo nikt w mojej rodzinie (do której mam okazję dojechać) nie zna dobrze ang.
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    • bluebaloon Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 13:27
      Poprawię troche ale ogólnie dobrze skomponowanewink "Why I like HER? Because Natalia is
      never big-headed and we have a lot of fun together. I realy like spend time with her.
      Somtines we can't agree because she listen different music than me. And what she looks
      like? Like I said earlier, Natalia isn't very tall[...] In future she wanna (be, doing)"breadlock".
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      • zmayslona13 Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 13:45
        Dzięki kiss
    • zmayslona13 Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 13:28
      Hej, proszę, to ważne!!!
      • sylwek11 Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 13:52
        Nie znam się zbyt dobrze na angielskim tak żeby ci pomóc . Może sprawdź na
        tłumaczu google . Tylko po polsku i sprawdź swoje błędy .
    • mroweczka_xxx Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 14:02
      My THE best friend NAME IS Natalia, she’s 14 years old and SHE like black
      clothes and reggae music.
      Natalia is medium size, SHE'S shorter than me.
      Why I like she? I think that because Natalia never HASN'T (PRESENT PERFECT, A
      JAK NIE BRAŁAŚ TO SKREŚL NEVER) a big-headed and I can’t bored with HER.
      Sometimes she’s too much honest and we never HASN'T agree with choOse music, but
      I really like spAnd time with HER.
      And what she look LIKE? I said, Natalia ISN'T a very tall. She has got a long,
      straight, brown hair and dark eyes.
      In closed future she IS GOING TO (PRZYPUSZCZENIE/MARZENIE) dreadlock.


      CHYBA TAK ;]
      • mroweczka_xxx Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 14.10.10, 14:06
        SORRRRYYY ! ! !

        NAPISAŁAM : Natalia never HASN'T
        A MA BYĆ : Natalia HAS NEVER ! ! !
    • green_lejdi13 Re: Pilnie prosze o pomoc 15.10.10, 11:11
      My best friend called Natalia, she’s 14 years old and she like black clothes and reggae music.
      Natalia is medium size and she's shorter than me.
      Why I like her? I think that because Natalia is never a big-headed and I can’t bored with she.
      Sometimes she’s too much honest and we never can’t agree with chose music, but I really like
      to spend time with her.
      How does she look? Like I said, Natalia isn't very tall. She has got a long, straight, brown hair
      and dark eyes.
      In the future she would like to do dread lock. (nie wiem co to znaczy, ale wydaję mi się że
      pisze się to oddzielnie)

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