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Electronic games :) - please check my essay

19.03.06, 18:09
Nowadays electronic games has becoming extremely popular. Not only children,
but also adults can’t imagine their life without this “boon”. But does
electronic games stop people from being creative? I think that the answer is
not simple, because there are some good and bad sides of playing games.

First of all electronic games help us to develop our manual skills. If we
choose educational ones, we can also make our knowledge diversified and
become more creative.
Playing with other people and doing it together is the best method to learn
to understand others and behave properly. Its also a nice way of spending
free time and it’s a way of getting in touch with people from all over the
world (thanks to the internet).
The other thing is, that some games are in English or in the other language
and because of this, we can improve our language skills and become more
fluent in it.

But on the other hand playing electronic games can be like a drug. Some
people can become addicted to it.
Furthermore, children can have problem with making out what is good or bad
and don’t be able to distinguish fantasy from reality.
Instead of playing hop-scotch or cheef live people choose electronic games,
as to be a better way of spending their leisure time.

To sum up I can say that playing electronic games can be a good way of
spending our free time, but we can’t crossed the border of common sense. It
can help us to become more creative, but if we use it reasonably and in
moderation.
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    • waldek1610 Computer games :) "Doing it together" ??? :) 20.03.06, 10:47
      1. Computer games... not; electronic games.

      2. People playing computer games together... not; "people doing it together"
      (sounds like youre talking about sex).

      3. Try not to use lenghty sentences, and limit the number of "it is'" "it is
      not's"...instead of "it" name what you're talking about. Be precise, and don't
      repeat simple sentence structure over and over, it makes your text boring.
    • natalia.brzeska Re: Electronic games :) - please check my essay 20.03.06, 13:09


      >Nowadays electronic games has becoming
      ARE BECOMING


      >But does electronic games stop people
      But DO computer games...


      >make our knowledge diversified
      expand our knowledge, develop our knowledge itp, z pewnością nie "make our
      knowledge costam"

      >Playing with other people and doing it together is the best method to learn
      > to understand others and behave properly.

      Justify this somehow...

      There are far too many mistakes for me to continue. Focus on your topic
      sentences. One thought = one paragraph. Your writing is very chaotic, it's like
      a list of thoughts, rather than: topic sentence, explanation, example...

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