rozprawka

[matka_chrzestna]

cześć :)
prosze o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów ;)

Nowadays students want to be more financially independent for that reason
they have credit cards. But there are some advantages and disadvantages
relevant possess plastic money.

There is no denying that students became more responsible when they have bank
account. They learn how to plan expenses and discovered that they cannot buy
everything whatever they want because their financial resources are limited.
This skills will be use in their adult live. What is more, if you have charge
card you do not have to carry money because you can pay it or pick money out
from cashpoint. It is very comfortable. Another thing is that when people
have not got money they can run into debt and later pay them off.

On the other hand, credit cards have also disadvantages. First of all,
students may get into debt. When they have too big expenses and they do not
control them it makes a lot of problems. Secondly, credit card can be lost
and money from account may be stolen. It is also true that banks assess
different small fees for banking transactions. For students each penny is
important so it is additional financial burden for their budget.

In conclusion, there are many pros and cons of possessing credit cards for
students. The decision of whether to have account in bank and use plastic
money or keep cash in sock remains a matter of personal choice.

dzieki :)
pozdrawiam ;)
Matka Chrzestna 8)

P.S.
Pozdrowienie dla ludzi z mojej szkoły, którzy to czytają :P

[hayden]

Witaj,

Tak bym to zmienił:


Nowadays, students want to be more financially independent and that is why
they have credit cards. However, there are some advantages and disadvantages
relevant to possessing plastic money.
There is no denying that students become more responsible when they have a bank account. They learn how to plan expenses and discover that they cannot buy everything what they want because their financial resources are limited.
This skill will be useful in their adult live. What is more, if you have a charge card, you do not have to carry money on you because you can pay with the card or take money out through a cashpoint. It is very comfortable. Another reason is that when people have not got money they can use an overdraft and later pay it off.
On the other hand, credit cards have also disadvantages. First of all,
students may get into debt. Too many ucontrolled expenses cause a lot of problems. Secondly, credit cards can be lost and money from the account may be stolen. It is also true that banks charge different small fees for banking transactions. For students, every single penny is important, so these charges are an additional financial burden on their budget.
In conclusion, there are many pros and cons of possessing credit cards by students. The decision, whether to have a bank account and use plastic
money or keep cash at home remains a matter of personal choice.

Pozdrawiam,

hayden

[margarita1979]

Adult live czy life?

[matka_chrzestna]

ok dzieki?
moze ktoś jeszcze ma jakieś propozycje :) ?

[efedra]

matka_chrzestna napisała:

> moze ktoś jeszcze ma jakieś propozycje :) ?

W drugiej wersji wprowadzilabym kilka zmian:

1. However, using plastic money has some advantages and disadvantages

2. This skill will be useful in their adult life

3. It is very convenient.

4. they can use overdraft and pay it off later.

5. It is also true that some banks charge
(nie jest prawdziwe zdanie, ze wszystkie banki)