Memo... please help

17.12.05, 13:48
Witam, mam prośbę, czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zadania, które mam
oddać na poniedziałek.
Z góry bardzo dziękuję!!!

Mam napisać memo do gościa ponieważ klienci piszą, że dostają pomylone książki
(nie te co zamówili).
oto treść:
she asks you tp write a memo, under her name, to Harry Holland, Supervisor of
the Packing Departmen. "Be tactful", she says. "Ask Harry to have customers
orders checked twice before posting them. If he need extra staff he should
make an appointment trough you to see me. Ask if he has any problems of
procedure, lazy staff or any other difficulties. tell him I appreciate how
hard he works but must satisfy the customers at all costs".

Moje pogrupowanie odnośnie wagi rzeczy jest następujące:
1. checked twice
2. Problems
3. New staff
4. Satisfy customers
5. Appreciate his work

Czy to dobre ustawienie?

A teraz moje memo:

To: Mr Harry Holland, Supervisor of the Packing Department
From:Mrs Anne Dexter, General Manager
Subject: Put up books
Date:(dzisiejsza)

Tell the employee that they have to double check customers orders before
posting them. If you have any problems with staff, procedure or other plaease
inform me. In case if you need new staff make an appointment to see me.

These suggestions is for clients care, because all of them must be
satisfy. Certeinly I appreciate your work up to now.
    • easystreet Re: Memo... please help 17.12.05, 21:44
      Ok raz to zrobie, bo wyczuwam desperacje: memo jest OK ale pare bledow mozna
      uniknac:

      To: Harry Holland, Supervisor of the Packing Department
      > From: Anne Dexter, General Manager
      > Subject: Book Orders
      > Date:(dzisiejsza)
      >
      > Please tell your employees to double check customer orders before
      > mailing them. If you have any problems with the staff, with procedure or
      of any other nature, please let me know.
      > Should you need additional staff, see me ASAP.
      > I trust you will find these suggestions useful because, as you well know, our
      goal is 100% customer satisfaction. Please know that your efforts on behalf of
      our company are certainly appreciated.
      • karul to:harrry holland 18.12.05, 04:25
        subject" mail orders
        date:

        Please inform your staff to double check costomre orders beforem mailing them
        out. If you encounter any problerm with the staff or with the procedure, please
        let me know. Should you require any additional help, please see me asap.
        I trust you will find this useful as you well know our goal is full customer
        satisfaction. I want you to know that your work is appreciated.
    • krism50 Re: Memo... please help 18.12.05, 12:39
      Bardzo dziękuję za pomoc!!!
    • ampolion Re: Memo... please help 23.12.05, 18:07
      owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/pw/p_memo.html
      www.ecf.utoronto.ca/~writing/handbook-memo.html
      oregonstate.edu/dept/eli/buswrite/memos.html
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