Help me, please !!

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Witajcie!!!
Miałem napisać takie krótkie opowiadanko z użyciem kilku wyrażeń. Czy ktoś z
Was zechciałby sprawdzić i skorygować błędy.Możecie też ewentualnie coś
dodać. Z góry serdecznie dziekuje. Aha nie mamy za dużo czasu - lekcje mam o
15.00. Jeszcze raz dzięki.

Ross & Jane

One day Ross met Jane at library. She was sitting on the chair and she was
reading a book „ Don’t talk with a stranger" ba Patrick O’Toole.
Ross chatted Jane up. He knew book’s author and Peter O’Toole was her
favourite writer.
They was talking about poetry and literature all the evening.
Then they chanched the telephone numbers. They rang each other next day.
Ross and Jane knew: „ It was love at first sight". They fell in love.
Then they went out together to the cinema.
There Ross kissed Jane for the first time and after that they were kissing
all the film.
A few weeks later they arranged meeting with their parents. It was engagement
party. Ross gave Jane a ring.
Then they got married and they moved in together.
A few months later Jane bred son - Patrick. Next year she bred daughter -
Veronica.
After five years relationship there were rumours of affairs on Ross. It was
true.
He has betrayed Jane.
They split up.
Finally Jane resembled the book wchich she was reading in library - „Don’t
talk with a stranger „.

there you go

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Ross & Jane

One day Ross met Jane at library. She was sitting on the chair and
reading a book ? Don?t talk with a stranger" by Patrick O?Toole.
Ross tried to chat Jane up. He knew the book's author and Peter O?Toole
was her favourite writer.
They were talking about poetry and literature all the evening long.
Then they've exchanged telephone numbers. They rang each other up
the next day.
Ross and Jane knew: ? It was love at first sight". They fell in love.
Then they went out together to the cinema.
There Ross kissed Jane for the first time and after that they were kissing
all the way through the film.
A few weeks later they arranged meeting with their parents. It was
engagement party. Ross gave Jane a ring.
Then they got married and moved in together.
A few months later Jane had a baby boy - Patrick. Next year she had a
little girl - Veronica.
Within five years of the relationship Ross was rumoured to have affairs. It
was true.
He has cheated on Jane.
They split up.
Finally Jane remembered the book wchich she was reading in the library -
"Don't talk with a stranger".