Proszę o korektę :)

[irminaa]

Jestem początkującą uczennicą języka angielskiego, stawiam dopiero pierwsze
kroki. Serdecznie proszę o sprawdzenie pracy i wykrycie błędów ;)

Dear Tom,

Thanks a lot for your lovely letter which arrived last week. I hope you're
well and you don't have your depressed now. I am worrying about you.
I think you should trurly speak with your friend Eric about your bad
feelingss. He would help you to find a reason. Mayby, you should go to
doctor-psychologist. Specialist should say what can you do with your problem.
Do you remember our last winter-holiday in Austria? We met Jamie
Johnson-famous singer in hotel ans she taken us to skiing in the highest
mountain in Alpy. We were there together and it was wonderfull time.
What do you think about holiday in Poland? I would very much like to see you
there. Write and tell me when you have your holiday. I hope to see you there,

Lots of love,


*Z góry serdecznie dziękuję :)

[julie_bella2001]

<Thanks a lot for your lovely letter which arrived last week>
Thanks a lot for your lovely letter,which arrived last week/albo that arrived
last week.
<you don't have your depressed now.>
and you are not depressed now.
<I am worrying about you.>
I am worried about you.
<I think you should trurly speak with your friend Eric about your bad
feelingss>
I think you should TRULY TALK TO your friend Eric about your (bad) feelings.
<He would help you to find a reason>
He would help you to find a solution.
<Mayby, you should go to doctor-psychologist>
Maybe, you should go to the psychologist.
<Specialist should say what can you do with your problem.>
A specialist should say what you can do about your problem
<Do you remember our last winter-holiday in Austria?>
Do you remember our last winter holidays in Austria during which we met Jamie
Johnson, a famous singer who took us skiing the highest mountain in the Alps?
<We were there together and it was wonderfull time.>
We were together then and it was A wonderFUL time
<What do you think about holiday in Poland?>
What do you think about holidayS in Poland?
<I would very much like to see you there>
I would very much like to see you here.
< I hope to see you there>
I hope to see you soon

[kurdelebele]

> <you don't have your depressed now.>
> and you are not depressed now.

and you are not depressed anymore.

[efedra]

julie_bella2001 napisała:

> <I would very much like to see you there>
> I would very much like to see you here.

Czy jesteś pewna, że Irmina mieszka w Polsce? Może dla niej to jest THERE.